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Love in your eyes Sitting silent by my side Till the end of life Going on holding hands Hold me up hold me tight Walking through the nights Lift me up to touch the sky Hold me up hold me tight Teaching me to love with heart Lift me up to touch the sky Helping me open my mind Teaching me to love with heart Helping me open my mind Can't you believe that you light up my way
No matter how that ease my path I can fly I'll never lose my faith I'm proud that I can fly See me fly To give the best of mine I'm proud to fly up high Till the end of the time Show you the best of mine Believe me I can fly Till the end of the time I'm proud that I can fly Believe me I can fly To give the best of mine I'm singing in the sky The heaven in the sky Show you the best of mine Stars in the sky The heaven in the sky Wishing once upon a time Nothing can stop me Give me love make me smile Spread my wings so wide Till the end of life

Proud of you

Writing Practice
楚雄紫溪中学 苏丽华

近年我省中考英语作文为:
半开放性作文 命题作文 提示性作文



1

* 1 *

1 ” 作文

围绕一个中心 叙述一个事例 表达一种情感

I Love …
2 0 1 2 年 楚 雄 市 满 分 作 文

书写工整美观 词数符合要求 (80词以上) 三段式 连词使用恰当 有一定比例的复合句

有亮点词、句

英语作文高分技巧
一、熟练运用五个“三”

①审题抓点 用准三种时态
1、一般现在时——描写人或事物

2、一般过去时——记叙已发生的事情 3、一般将来时——表达想法和愿望

②确定关键词句 用对三种句型
句型1:主 + 谓 I grow up . 句型2:主 + 系 + 表(n./ adj. /num.) Teacher’s smile was like a spring wind.

句型3:主 + 谓 + 宾 I always remember this thing .

③列出提纲 用上三个从句
1、定语从句
But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much.

2、状语从句
When I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.

3、宾语从句
I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.

④连段成文 用好三类连词
A. 三类连词
1、表顺序:to begin with, first, then, later, at last… 2、表转折:although, however, but… 3、表因果:because, so…

B. “三段式”
Opening Body Ending

(2—3句话) “凤头” (6—8句话) “猪肚” (2—3句话) “豹尾”

⑤凸显三处亮点
1、There + be …
In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable.

Teacher’s smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved.

2、too…to…/ so…that…

3、It’s + adj.+ for + sb.+ to do sth. / I find it +adj. to do sth.
I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.

二、熟练掌握“五步曲”

(Look)




提炼要点 草拟提纲


(Link)


(Write)

(Think) (Rank)

审题抓点 把握时态 确定体裁 构思文路

连句成文 从句

适量

规范誊写 长短交替

三、提炼“骨架”,仿写范文
2011年八地联考书面表达真题展示
第三节书面表达(满分l5分)

I Am Not a Child Any More
提示:在阳光雨露里,我已长高、长壮!但这还不 是全部,长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、 理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是……成长的点点 滴滴,久久不能忘记。请以‘‘I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事,表 明你已 不再是一个小孩。

2011中考 满分作文 I Am

Not a Child Any More

I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said: “Dear, you have grown up.” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.

提炼 “骨架” 仿写范文
第1句 I am … now. I have changed a lot. 第2句 I used to be …. But now, I am ... 第3句 The most important thing is that I have …

It was a …. When I … So I ... I didn’t know … until … They both said…, although it…. After supper, I found…, I…. When …, with…, she said: “….” 第9句 It was the first time that I... 第10句 I realized I was ….
第4句 第5句 第6句 第7句 第8句

四、熟练话题相互转换,以不变应万变
I Am Not a Child Any More Love for my parents / Learn to thank / … ________________________________________________
I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and thank / love others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said: “Dear, you have grown up and learnt to love and thank others .” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. Also, I realized that love is the easiest thing if you put your heart into it. /we should learn to thank .

备考演练

Friends help and support each other in the life.

Parents care about and look after us day by day.

Teachers encourage and help us all the time.

An Unforgettable Thing
提示:生活中有许多令你难忘的人和事 ,

给你留下了深刻地印象,是同学、朋友间 的互助和支持,父母的关心和照顾,老师的鼓 励与帮助,又或是你我身边的一次次感 动??这一切都令我们难以忘怀。请以 “An Unforgettable Thing”为话题,用 英语写一篇不少于80词的短文,记叙一件值 得你回忆的事,让这美好的瞬间成为永恒。

Key words

memories wonderful unforgettable

forget make

share… with…
give up

An Unforgettable thing

remember care about look after try my best to encourage move help happiness support

Wonderful sentences 精彩句示例
开头句 1. In our lives, there are so many wonderful memories that make us unforgettable. 2. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you. …

Opening

Body


中间段

结尾句 1. For me, it’s the most unforgettable thing. 2. I always remember the thing in my heart. …

Ending

小组合作在卡纸上完成以下任务:
Opening Task 1 A. 第1、2组 Ending 第3、4组 1— 4组交互学习,代表在黑板上展示 (7ˊ) Body B. 第5至8组 第5至8组完成中间段后,各组间交流 (10ˊ)
Task 2 组间合作:组合开头、中间和结尾段 (3ˊ) Task 3 第5至8组代表展示成果。

范文展示 An Unforgettable Thing

重复关键词

How time flies! I grow up day by day. In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much. I am eager to 连词 share my unforgettable thing with you. 主题句 I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. However, every time I wanted to give up, she encouraged me with the brightest smile. Teacher’s smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved. At that moment, happiness was from the bottom of heart. It made me try my best again. Since then, I become interested in English little by little. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Also, I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble. For me, it’s the most unforgettable thing. I always remember the thing in my heart. Whenever I remember this thing,my heart is full of happiness and courage. 再次点题 并抒发情感

Summary

高分技巧
②三种句型 ④三类连词

一、熟练运用五个“三”
①三种时态 ③三个从句 ⑤三处亮点

二、熟练掌握“五步曲”
看 想 列 连 写

三、提炼“骨架”,仿写范文 四、熟练话题相互转换,以不变应万变

There is a will, there is a way.
有志者,事竟成。

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