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I used to hate English writing

Learning aims
学生追求清晰整洁的文章;

学生学习使用Hamburger 三段式理论,并逐步 形成含有bread1,body,bread2的篇章意识;

学生能使用topic sentences 和linking words 修 饰美化文章; 学习写一个漂亮的ending。

Scores分数档
第一档:(0~2分)白卷或 文不对题;只抄写了提示。

Numbers 4人

第二档:(3~6分)语言错误多,影响意思表达;错 误百出,不知所云。 第三档:(7~9分)内容基本完整,表达基本清晰; 语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。

9人
11人 10人

第四档:(10~12分)内容较完整,表达较 清晰;行文基本连贯;语言有少量错误。

第五档:(13~15分)内容完整,有较好的框架结构表达 清楚;语言基本无误;行文连贯,能使用修饰词或表示顺 序、逻辑关系的连接词。鼓励使用高级词汇与丰富的句子。

2人

The average平均分

8.0分 13分 2分

The highest最高分 The lowest最低分

English writing can be difficult.
? What things are difficult for you in writing?

I can't ... I have trouble/difficulties in... I make mitakes in... I... ... ...

同学们,经过两年多的英语学习,你对如何写好 Writing 书面表达应该有了更好的认识,请你根据以下两个方 面的提示写一篇以“I used to hate English writing.”为 题的英语演讲稿,可做适当的添加。
I used to hate English writing. In the past Now be afraid to write…. be able to write…. make mistakes in… learn words by… have difficulties in… take notes and make my own sentences … …

Tip1: Read and think carefully with TPTS.
通过TPTS,认真审题 I used to hate English writing.” Topic(主题):___________ The 1st person Person(人称): ___________ I The past tense and Tense(时态):___________ present tense A speech Style(文体):____________

How many points(分数) would you give to the article about handwriting(书写)? 1—15

Tip2: Write clearly and tidilywith 100 words.
整齐清晰地书写,字数不少于100词

An article is like a hamburger.

Hamburger rule

Beginning Bread 1

Body Body

Ending
Bread 2

Tip3: Make a structure with 3B
以Bread1,body,bread2编织文章框架

How many points would you give to this article about structure(框架)? Hello, boys and girls. It’s my pleasure to be here to give you a speech. My topic is I used to hate English writing. I used to be afraid to write in the past. Because I didn’t write very well. I make mistakes in vocabularies. Because it’s difficult. I have difficulties in make complete sentences. But now , I am able to write well. I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. I try one’s best improves my English writing.Thank you for listening.

Hello, boys and girls. It’s my pleasure to be here to give you a speech. My topic is I used to hate English writing. Bread1 I use

d to be afraid to write in the past. Because I didn’t write very well. I make mistakes in vocabularies. Because it’s difficult. Ihave difficulties in making complete Body sentences. But now , I am able to write well. I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. I try one’s best improves my English writing. Bread2 Thank you for listening.

Find a proper topic sentence for this paragraph.
I used to be afraid to write in the past. Because I made didn’t write very well. I make mistakes in vocabularies. had Because welcome todifficult.PowerPoint difficulties in making it’s it was use these I have templates, New completeContent design, 10 years experience sentences. A: I used to have many problems in English writing. B: I used to have trouble in spelling words. C: But now , I learn by asking the teacher for help. D: But now , I have some ideas that may help. But now , I am able to write well. I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. I my try one’s best improves my English. to improve

Tip4: A topic sentence helps a lot.

Which do you like better?

A:I am able to write well. I take notes . I make my own sentences in class . B: First, I am able to write well. Second,I take notes and make my own sentences in class .
Linking words:
步骤:First=first of all, second, what’s more, finally= at last 转折: however, but , at the same time, although ... 因果:because, so, as a result, ... 举例: for example, such as, like…. 总结: in a word, in fact, as you can see...

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I used to have many problems in English writing. I used to be afraid to write in the past. Because I didn’t write very well. I made mistakes in vocabularies. Because it was difficult. Ihad difficulties in making complete sentences. ? But now,I have some ideas that may help. I am able to write well. I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. I try my best to improve my English writing.

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I used to have many problems in English writing. First of all, I used to be afraid to write in the past. Because I didn’t write very well. Second, I made mistakes in vocabularies. Because it was difficult. What’s worse, I had difficulties in making complete sentences. ? But now ,I have some ideas that may help. To begin with, I am able to write well. Then, I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. Finally , I try my best to improve my English.

Tip5: Linking words make the article more logical 连词使文章更有逻辑性.
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Bread1

Hello, boys and girls. It’s my pleasure to be here to give you a speech. My topic is I used to hate English writing.

I used to have many problems in English writing. First of all, I used to be afraid to write in the past. Because I didn’t write very well. Second, I made mistakes in vocabularies. Because it was difficult. Body What’s worse, I had difficulties in making complete sentences. But now ,I have some ideas that may help. To begin with, I am

able to write well. Then, I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. Finally , I try my best to improve my English.
Bread2 Thank you for listening.

Topic sentence Hello, boys and girls. It’s my pleasure to be here to give you a speech. My topic is I used to hate English writing. Bread1 I used to have plenty of challenges .First, I used to be afraid of writing. Second, I used to make mistakes in words spelling. What’s worse, I had difficulties in making complete sentences. Finally, I lost interest in English writing. Things sure change. Now I am different from what I used to be. I find it amazing to finish my English writing. To begin with, I remember the vocabularies by reading English Body books. It helps a lot. Then, I take a lot of notes in class and write my own original sentences using the grammar. At last, I keep the habit of writing diaries and ask my English teacher for help. Bread2 Let’s not worry about our problems in English writing. Let’s face the problems instead. Thank you for listening.

Summary
Tip1: Read and think carefully with TPTS. Tip2: Write clearly and tidily(整齐地)with 100 words

Tip3: Make a structure with 3B Tip4: A topic sentence helps a lot.
Tip5: Linking words make the article more logical (有逻辑的).

Have a try
I used to hate English writing.
Hello , boys and girls. It’s my pleasure to be here to give you a speech. My topic is _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ __________________________ Thank you for listening!

Homework
1. To revise your article and rewrite it again.
2. To read model article after class for 5 times. 3 . To collect some beautiful words and sentences on the notebook.

Thank you!

Judges 裁判员
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Editors编辑

fair

adj.公平的

creative

What kind of ending would you write?
1.Where there is a will, there is a way.王林锋,徐晶 2.Nothing is difficult to a willing heart . 3.Doing is better than saying.

Tip5: A good ending makes it perfect.
Eg: Where there is a will, there is a way. So , everyone don’t give up if you are in trouble. Thank you for listening.

Hello, boys and girls. It’s my pleasure to be here to give you a speech. My topic is I used to hate English writing.

I used to have many problems in English writing. First of all, I used to be afraid to write in the past. Because I didn’t write very well. Second, I made mistakes in vocabularies. Because it was difficult. What’s worse, I had difficulties in making complete sentences. Body Now, I have some ideas that may help. To begin with, I am able to write well. Then, I take notes and make my own sentences in class every day. Finally, I try my best to improve my English . Where there is a wi

ll, there is a way. So , Bread2 everyone ,don’t give up if you are in trouble. Thank you for listening.

Bread1


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