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九年级英语写作课导学案

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九年级英语写作课导学案 白寨镇第二初级中学 白惠娟

学习目标

1.了解议论文写作的篇章技巧,使文章具有整体性。

2.掌握常用的连接词或句型,令作文更有灵气。

3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。 学习过程

复习导入 呈现知识精点

记叙文的写作要素有哪些?

记叙文的写作要素: 5W 1H

议论文的写作要素有哪些?呈现本节课的学习目标

1.了解议论文写作的篇章技巧,使文章具有整体性。

2.掌握常用的连接词或句型,令作文更有灵气。

3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。 自学交流 对点精炼

1.自主学习

议论文要素: 2W 1H

What-----提出观点 (文章的中心句)

Why-----论述观点 (正面和反面或多方面) How----如何做 (围绕观点,说明要求) What----总结全文 (观点首尾呼应) 九年级议论文写作技巧指导

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1.谋篇布局 ——写好篇章结构

2. 运用连接词 ——赋予语言灵气。

谋篇布局——写好篇章结构

Beginning开头 topic sentence 主题句

----说出文中的要点、核心问题 Middle 正文 supporting sentences支持句

----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开

展叙述、讨论

Ending concluding sentence 结论句 结尾 ----对全文的总结和概括。

2.阅读范文,合作交流,对点精思。

范文1:

在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗?请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左右的短文,描述你平时所做家务以及你对家务的看法。

提示:1.扔垃圾 2. 扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭

4.洗衣服 5. 为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗

要求:语句通畅,语法正确。

不得逐句翻译。

满分作文赏析

As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. (主题句what).I often help them do 2

housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . After supper, I always wash dishes . I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.(即总括又阐明看法)

怎样写好文章的开头?Good beginning is half done

1. 仔细2. 开头万能句型:

1) ....plays an important part in the...

2) As we all know, ... becomes more and more....

3) As everybody knows, ...is one of the most...in ....

4) Many people say that.... But I don’t think so.

5) I will never forget the ....

正文:语言要,层次要Which sentence is better ?

1.I played football on the playground.

I fell down and hurt my legs.

2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs.

所以我们要巧用 词,赋予语言灵气。

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Which one is best?

1. We are good friends. We should help each other.

2. We are good friends and we should help each other.

3. As we are good friends , we should help each other.

转换句型

1.I was deeply moved and I couldn’t say a word.

2. I was_____ moved ______ say a word

所以在写作的过程中,我们要富于转换 。

结尾画龙点睛,首尾呼应

结尾经典词组、句型:

At last/ Finally ... 最后

In a word, ... 总而言之

In short, ... 简言之

We hope that··· 我们希望

Let’s try our best to ....

I believe if we can..., ... will be ....

What a ...! / How...!

写作训练 对点精创

生活中充满了爱,有父母的爱,有兄弟姐妹的爱,有朋友的爱,有老师的爱......请以“Love”为话题,简要描

述一件发生在你身边的事。

要求:1、语言规范,书写工整。

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2、80个词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)

3、文中不要出现真实的人名,校名和地名

Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means

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咱们给这篇文章加入主题过渡句和连接词吧,让它生动起来。 Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding.

Please write your own composition.

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这节课你都学到了什么?

告诫一

抓住大分,再争取小分 ;锦上添花。

只抓小分,放弃大分;竹篮打水一场空

写作难在坚持,成在坚持。

告诫二:

大家要下苦功夫,更要用巧功夫。

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