I like Liu Qian. He is a creative magician.
I like Liu Qian because he is a creative magician.
did magic shows surprised
2009 CCTV Spring Festival Gala
He did magic shows well. Everyone was surprised. He did magic shows so well that everyone was really surprised.
He took the ring out of an egg.
People cheered for him.
when as soon as because
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because so…that… before after when
worked hard, won many prizes
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although so…that… but because
not like, fish, healthy
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not…until… when as soon as before after since
knew Liu Qian, met, 2001, Beijing
Liu Qin was 7 years old. He fell in love with magic. He graduated from the university, then he became a magician. He doesn’t have a teacher to teach him, but he works very hard. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. Everyone knows it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
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Liu Qian ‘s pen pal
Name The boy’s Jack is Jack. name Birthday March. 12th, 12th, 1994. He was born on March. 1994
Family parents, a car accident. His parents died indied, car accident
He likes watch Liu Qian’s magic shows Hobby watching Liu Qian’s magic shows. On weekends he is busy. He does his weekend busy, do homework, take lessons homework and takes lessons. activities Problem stressedout, exam He is too stressed out because of the exams.
because, although, when, so…that
Jack used to have a happy family. Unluckily, his parents died in a car accident.
He was 10 years old. However, he doesn’t
so ▼ that ▼very hard. He gets give up himself. He works
good grades. He likes watching Liu Qian’s
▼ magic shows to relax himself. He is a top Although
student. He has a big problem these days. He
because ▼The important exam is is too stressed out.
Dear Jack, I know you have many problems. You have much homework. You have to sleep late. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. You study hard. Your English is not good. Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? You don’t waste time. You can finish your homework quickly. Second, you’d better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident. I hope you will be better soon. Yours,
ck, I know you have many problems. You have so much homework that you have to stay up. Then you feel sleepy in class. You are too stressed out because of the exams. Although you study hard, you are not good at English. Here I have some advice for you. First, why not sleep a little earlier? If you make full use of every 充分利用 minute, you will finish your homework quickly. Second, you’d better relax yourself by watching my show. Third, you must be confident. I hope you will be better soon. Yours,
Writing strategy : How can we make the articles more fluent (流畅的）and more beautiful? proper conjunctions (适当的连词) Other ways : good phrases（词组）
wonderful sentence patterns（句型）
假如你是Jack, 写信给刘谦，感谢他的建议， 并告诉他你的变化以及对考试的信心。
你的变化包括： 1. 按时完成作业，睡眠每天8小时… 2. 学习努力…取得好成绩… 3. 自信，不紧张…
Dear Liu Qin, Thanks for your last letter. Your advice is really helpful. I have changed a lot. Now…
The exam is coming soon. Actually I am not worried at all. I believe I will do a good job after working hard. Yours, Jack
I have changed a lot. Now, I finish my homework on time and hardly stay up late at night . Because I sleep 8 hours every day, I am energetic in class. Also, I make full use of every minute. I study so hard that I can get good grades. To tell you the truth, I am pretty confident now and don’t feel nervous at all. What’s more, I often watch your shows when I feel tired. How wonderful your shows are!
A. Improve the letter you wrote .
B. Share the letter with your friend, find and learn some better sentences.