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假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

注意:

1.词数:100左右:

2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

I?m very happy to receive your letter, and I?m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I?ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours, Li Hua

满分理由

Dear Bob,

Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there?re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a

bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I?U be able to meet you at the airport, see you. Best wishes !

Yours, Li Hua

满分理由

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I?m so glad to know that you?ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I?ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It?s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you?ll like it. If not, I?ll try to find another place for you. Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

Dear Bob,

I?m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I?ve already found you a house near our school. I?d like to tell you something about it.

You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you?ll enjoy staying here!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

I?m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I?ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month. Yours,

Li Hua

【试题回放】

实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

注意:

1、对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;

students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different

opinions even though you don?t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听,则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

【全国卷I海南、宁夏】

【试题回放】

假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括:

1.外出购物

2.替房东还书

3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 尽快回电

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,

I?m going out shopping, and won?t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o?clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn?t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

描述你在学校的一次午餐,具体要求如下:

详细描述用餐的情况

简要表述你对这次午餐的感受

这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章,因为如果只是描述用餐情况,显然缺乏深度,夸夸其谈,流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中,笔者另辟蹊径,通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得,凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中,作者能够留有一片心灵净土,通过饮食来调节情绪,更好地面对挑战,表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单,文笔清新,语言精准,并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构,不失为一个很好的作文模板,供学生借鉴。

范文:

The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of

theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found

elsewhere.

The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school.

Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)

一、语法解构

现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang

倒装句

(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one

(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be

不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen

状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.

在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently。

假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:

1、 自我介绍;2、 祝贺苏琳生日;3、 感谢工作人员;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意:

1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文:

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I?m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I?ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I?ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she?s going to be three. I?d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这封信格式正确,行文规范,描述有条不紊,称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼,感情真挚,语言表述准确,洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情,以及希望自己愿望成真,得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理,结合了简单句和复合句,流畅自然,不露痕迹,的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词

1.delighted adj.欣喜的,快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生,生育 好句

I?d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情,正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和

它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

评析:定语从句的使用。

北京卷】

【试题回放】

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

注意: 词数不少于60.

提示词: 游乐园 amusement park 垃圾箱 bin

Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and

banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

We were tired but happy.

【名师点评】

本情景作文的内容要点如下:1.讨论;2.爬山;3.检拾别人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。内容要点可用不同方式表达。

好词

1 set off 出发 2. litter n.废弃物 3.respectively adv.分别地

好句

1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

在爬山时,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。

1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

然而,当我们登上山顶,被眼前的一幕惊呆了:瓶子和香蕉皮这样的废弃物到处都是。 评析:细节描写,生动形象。“shock”一词也用得生动传神。

实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于言表,更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听表示尊重,增进理解,建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子,消除代沟,……

老师倾听学生了解学生,满足需求,……

同学相互倾听增进友谊,互帮互学,……

怎样倾听(请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点。)

注意:

1、 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。

2、 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。

3、 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;

students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different

opinions even though you don?t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿,文中大量运用排比句型,不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息,而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式,将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听,则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词

1.promote v .促进 2. interpersonal adj.人际的3. generation gap. 代沟4. open-minded adj. 虚心的

好句

1. students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

同学之间应该互相倾听,这样他们可以互相学习和帮助,也会形成友谊。

评析:复杂句的组合,被动句的使用。

2. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.

我想强调的是我们每个人都应该更多的倾听他人。

评析:复合句的使用。

假设你是卜曼宜,你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机,因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点,用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点:1. 问题:手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修。 2. 要求:公司应尽快予以更换。

注意:

1. 词数为100左右;

2. 参考词汇:配件—— spare part;

3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入你所写词数);

4.已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn?t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. I had no choice but to go to the repairman. To my disappointment ,he said since

it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that for I can not wait that long. Therefore, I have to require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Bu Manyi

【名师点评】

积累卡片英汉互译

好词

1. disappointment n.失望 2.desperate adj.绝望的3. consideration n.体谅 好句

To my disappointment ,he said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

令我失望的是,他说因为在中国是新款手机,所以没有配件来修理。

评析:复杂句的组织; to my disappointment, 常用短语。

例文】

I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom. I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. "What a pity!" I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at me.I love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad.

Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, "Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don't lose confidence. Keep on your study and you will succeed!" I knew it was from the good friend of mine.These words

encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.

【译文】

我有一个很好的朋友。他是一个英俊的男孩和他的智慧光芒的眼睛。

我知道,因为他高一年级。我们都对英语感兴趣。一旦我们都进入了一个英语比赛。如何热切我期望自己能中奖!一听说我在比赛失败后,我几乎不能阻止我的眼泪。 “真可惜!”我喃喃地对自己一遍又一遍。我认为,世界变得寒冷,每个人都似乎在笑我,我爱英语,并全力研究,因为我在初中第一天。我什至梦想进入一个外语学院。因此,我感到非常难过。

就在这个时候,我收到了简短的英文信,说:“失败是成功之母。振作起来!不要失去信心。继续你的学习,你就会成功!”我知道它从mine.These是好朋友的话让我非常鼓舞。我忘了我所有的悲伤。从此,我更加努力学习英语。在接下来的英语竞赛,我获得了第一名。当然,他很高兴与我的成功。

例文】

I have a good friend. He is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom. I have known him since Senior One. We are both interested in English. Once both of us entered for an English contest. How eagerly I expected to get a prize! On hearing that I had failed in the contest, I could hardly hold back my tears. "What a pity!" I murmured to myself over and over again. I felt that the world had become cold and everyone seemed to be laughing at me.I love English and have gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. I have even dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. So I felt very sad. Just at this time, I received a short letter in English, saying, "Failure is the mother of success. Cheer up! Don't lose confidence. Keep on your study and you will succeed!" I knew it was from the good friend of mine.These words

encouraged me greatly. I forgot all my sadness. From then on, I studied English

even harder. In the next English contest, I got the first prize. Of course, he was delighted with my success.

【译文】

我有一个很好的朋友。他是一个英俊的男孩和他的智慧光芒的眼睛。

我知道,因为他高一年级。我们都对英语感兴趣。一旦我们都进入了一个英语比赛。如何热切我期望自己能中奖!一听说我在比赛失败后,我几乎不能阻止我的眼泪。 “真可惜!”我喃喃地对自己一遍又一遍。我认为,世界变得寒冷,每个人都似乎在笑我,我爱英语,并全力研究,因为我在初中第一天。我什至梦想进入一个外语学院。因此,我感到非常难过。

就在这个时候,我收到了简短的英文信,说:“失败是成功之母。振作起来!不要失去信心。继续你的学习,你就会成功!”我知道它从mine.These是好朋友的话让我非常鼓舞。我忘了我所有的悲伤。从此,我更加努力学习英语。在接下来的英语竞赛,我获得了第一名。当然,他很高兴与我的成功。

【例文】

A new park for children has been set up to welcome' the coming of Children's Day,

The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu. Entering the park you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand,which is the symbol of the world peace. In the middle is a lake, around Which are all kinds of trees and flowers. There are many boats on the take and some children are boating happily, To the south of the lake is a hill with a lot of monkeys on it. The Children's Pa]ace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show. To the west of the lake is a place for children to play, where there are many recreational facilities.

I'm sure the children in our city will have a happy festival this year

【译文】

一个新的儿童公园已经成立,欢迎'的儿童节的到来,

该公园是在我们的城市南部,占地500亩。走进公园,你可以看到来自不同种族的儿童雕像,手挽着手,这是世界和平的象征。在中间有一个湖,周围是各种树木和花卉。上有需要,

有些孩子愉快地划船,要在湖的南方许多船只是一个有很多山猴子上。儿童的王牌在于东部,其中各种展览展出的。为了在湖的西面是儿童玩的地方,那里有许多娱乐设施。 我敢肯定,在我们城市的孩子有一个快乐的节日!

【例文】

TVs and Radios

TVs are more useful than radios. From TV you can see and hear what is

happening in the world. However, radios are not disappearing. They are still with us. And the number of listeners is becoming larger. Do you know why? One reason for this is the invention of the transistor. A transistor radio can be very small. It is very easy to be carried. Besides, radio broadcasts are better for blind people. Many old people don?t have good eyesight. They can?t watch TV, but can listen to music or news over the radio. What?s more, a radio is cheaper than a TV set.

【译文】

电视及收音机

电视比收音机有用。你可以从电视看到和听到在世界上发生的。然而,收音机都没有消失。他们仍然和我们在一起。与听众人数越来越多。你知道为什么吗?

其中一个原因是晶体管的发明。一个晶体管收音机可以非常小。这是很容易被通过。此外,无线电广播是盲人更好。许多老人根本不具备良好的视力。他们可以不看电视,但可以在电台收听音乐或新闻。更重要的是,一个比一个收音机电视机便宜。

2009年广东高考英语满分作文

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Should tourists take photos with animals?

Koalas in wildlife parks can?t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists? behaviour illegal to protect the animals.

When people are visiting wildlife parks, they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.

If I were an animal in the wildlife park, I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn?t feel happy at all! I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself. However, I don?t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can?t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time, during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.

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游客应该给动物拍照吗?

考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡,因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想,使游客的非法行为,以保护动物。

当人们正在访问的野生动物公园,他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为,这将是一个有趣的经验,与动物拍照访问期间。

如果我是一种动物的野生动物园,我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时,与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响,我不会感到高兴了!我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。

但是,我不同意,如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园,将是很可惜的,如果他们不能的照片,一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间,在此期间,游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。

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