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中考作文复习指导

发布时间:2014-01-25 09:54:36  

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写作第一步



? 认真审题,找出文章要表 达的中心。


travel
stay at home
visit friends or parents

work


健康很重要。在学习和工作的压 travel 力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才 会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过 stay at 假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了 home 一次调查,上图是他们此次的调查 visit friends 结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国 or parents 际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, work 并提倡大家进行假日休闲。

写作第二步



? 用简单的句子或短语 列出文章要点。

根据以下关键词及图表用简 单的句子列出文章的要点

? 如何度假 ? 调查报告 ? 倡议假日休闲
travel stay at home visit friends or parents work


? A lot of people travel . ? Some people stay at home. ? Some other people visit friends or parents. ? A few people work. ? Enjoy your vacation.

How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

a nice head

a nice body
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

a nice tail

写作第三步:



? 加首尾,使结构完整。
? 可以采取总分总结构或者 总分结构,开头或结尾的 句子注意简洁,漂亮。

1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library. 2. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us don’t like them at all. 3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life. 4. What’s more, we ought to return books on time. 5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try me best to follow them. 6. Third , we must do lots of homework.

Head

3 2 1 4 6 5

Tail

? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. ? A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.

写作第四步:



? 恰当运用关联词句,使得 文章层次清晰,各个部分 衔接自然。

Let’s pLay the game.
?_____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. ?He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____.

Let’s pLay the game.
?We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. ?_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.

? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. ? According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

写作第五步:



? 选好词句,美化文章。在 有把握的情况下展示自己 的语言功底。


? According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And visiting friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.

Skill One Make your sentences correct ? Good good study, day day up. a week ? We should do sports once a week once. ? Saving Save the environment is our duty. ? There is going to have be a meeting today. ? I hope I can come true my dream. achieve

Skill Two Express in different ways. ? The teenagers like the computers. ? The teenagers are fond of the computers. ? Our parents really wish us to work hard. ? Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.

Skill Two Express in different ways. ? We shouldn’t eat junk food. ? We should keep away from the junk food. ? We should learn English grammar. ? It’s important to learn English grammar.

Skill Two Express in different ways.

? If you use English often, you will learn it better. ? The more you use English, the better you will learn it.

中考作文评分标准

第四档(12—15分)覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语 言结构。全文结构紧凑,有效地使用了语句间的连接成份,符合 英语交际习惯;具备较强的语言运用能力。 第三档(8—11分)覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语 言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份,较好地达到了交际的目 的。 第二档(4—7分)没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完 全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯,影响对写作内容的理解。 第一档(0—3分)漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。 词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯,无法传达有效信息。

上周三初三年 级组的同学进 行了一次体检, 结果期发现同 学们的视力下 降了。请你用 英语向全班同 学报告原因 (如图所示), 并提出倡议: 爱护我们的眼 睛。

眼睛近视 躺着看书 走路看书
1 — 4 2 — 3 1 — 12

眼睛疲劳 看电视 玩电脑

眼睛疼痛 强光下看书 弱光下看书

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Passage One
Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyes, so with the time goes by, the eyesight becomes poor and poorer. Two thirds of students’ eyes always get tired because they watch TV or play computer games for long. And a quarter of students always lie in the bed or walking while reading books, so they have become short-sighted. The others always read in strong sunlight or poor light so they have sore eyes often. It’s important for us to form a good reading habit to take good care of our eyes. So let’s do everything we can to improve our e

yes.

Passage Two
Boys and girls, as we know, our life is better than before. There are TV sets, computers and many modern machines. But, our modern life is harmful to our eyes too. Because two thirds of students feel their eyes tired, because of watching TV or playing computer games for a long time. And a quarter of students walk and lie in the bed while they reading. So, they become short-sighted. One twelfth of students have sore eyes. Because they read in strong light or in poor light. When I saw the numbers, I was very surprise at it. So, I hope everyone must keep a good habit to protect our eyes. We can do it!

Passage Three Boys and girls, Today we have a classmeet. This classmeet is dissincion a problem with our eyes. Two thirds of students feel their eyes tired. Because they watch TV or play computer. A quarter of students become short-sighted becasus they lie in bed or walking while read book. one twelth of students have sore eyes. because they read in strong or por light. Eyes is very important for us.

Everyone knows that we are living a modern life. At the same time, we are paid little attention to protecting ourselves. Eyes, for example. From the examine result, we can know it clearly. Two thirds of students feel their eyes tired because they watch TV or play computer games for long. A quarter of students became short-sighted because of lying in the bed or walking while reading. Some students read in strong light or poor light. That is why one twelfth have sore eyes. From the result, we must take good care of our eyes. If not, the eye-sight will become poorer and poorer. (by Zhou Chuanqi)

Thinking back on the past three weeks, we had our eyes examined. As a result, many students’ eyes are bad. About two thirds of students feel eyes tired because they often watch TV or play computer games for a long time. A quarter of students are short-sighted because they are walking or lying in bed while reading books. And one twelfth of students are reading in strong or poor light. That makes their eyes sore. As we know, our eyes are very useful for us. So please protect our eyes. (by Yang Bin)


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