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发布时间:2014-01-26 10:57:38  

提示作文

什么是提示性作文?提示性作文:就是给出一个标题或无标题,给出具体的内容,规定一定的字数,让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容,因此考生可以不再列出提纲,只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。

写好提示性作文应注意的事项

1、仔细审题,明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读,弄清这个题目要表达什么,然后对所给信息进行整理、组织,按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。

2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中,考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写,不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度,不要字数过多或过少。

例题分析

一、汉语提示

根据中文提示和英文提示词语,写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数60~70左右。

1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。

2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。

3、他向我询问去温泉饭店(the Hot Spring Hotel)的路。

4、我告诉他沿着路往前走,在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。

5、他非常感谢我,我也为能帮他而感到高兴。

提示词语:go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that(分析)

写作指导:根据提示我们了解到这是一篇记叙文,所以考生应马上想到时间

(yesterday evening),地点(on the road),人物(I, my mother and a foreigner),事件(how to show the way)。其次观察信息点,我们确定这篇文章应用过去式来表达。然后,确定这个事件应用第一人称来叙述。最后,按照信息点合理组织文章,别忘用上提示词语。

(例文)

Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner.

He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him.

二、英语提示

你收到一封咨询信,请你以旅行社工作人员的身份完成任务。

Dear Ace Travel,

I'm Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don't mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots? Thanks a lot.

Yours,

Li Ming

请你根据来信,从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方,向他提出建议。(80字左右)Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai

写作指导:这篇作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求。首先,我们要读懂英语提示的内容,也就是那封咨询信的内容。其次,我们要知道书信的写作方法。针对本道题,还要注意,这封信是以旅行社工作人员的身份来写的。最后,还要注意咨询信后的要求-从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方,向他提出建议及字数限制。 下面,我们来看看范文是怎么写的。

One Possible version:

Dear Li Ming,

I'm Gina. It's my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are

clean and comfortable in both places. What's more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.

Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. (It's also a wonderful place for shopping. )And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. (And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ) That's just my idea. I hope it would give you some help. Yours, Gina

对于,提示作文的写法大家都会了吗?不管什么作文的写作,都要要求我们对英语的词汇、短语以及常用的表达方法有一定的积累。所以,在学习写作的同时,不要放松对以上几个方面的复习。

饮食与健康

饮食安全★ 范文23.

假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑.你看了下面这封信后,也想写一篇关于该信的读后感,内容要点包括:你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿.

减肥问题★ 范文

24.

假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学

生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题

中国城市与传统节日

介绍首都北京★ 范文25.

请你阅读你的加拿大网友Tommy的e-mail,根据e-mail的内容,给他写一封回信.

Dear Li Lei,

I haven't heard from you for a long time. I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer

vacation. It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken

place since the 2008 Olympic Games. I would like to know something about Beijing, such as

places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tommy

中国传统节日★ 范文26.

根据中文大意和英语提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词供选用。注意:不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。

假设你是刘伟,你的美国朋友MIKE 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示,给Mike 写一封e-mail,向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。

内容提示:1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日;2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间) Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money

请你参考图文提示,写一篇60~80词的短文。

注意:1. 语言规范,语意完整,内容丰富。

2. 表达符合图意,书写规范。

3. 给出自己的观点。

4. 文章的开头已给出。

参考词:pollute, turn off the tap(水龙头),dry, save(节约 vt.), water resources(水资源)

From the pictures we know that _______________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

参考答案:

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted. Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes. The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died. Many people often waste water. For example, they often forget to turn off the taps. If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die. We can’t live without water. So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources. We must save water and stop polluting it. If we do that, Things will be much better.

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