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中考作文如何得高分

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雨花台中学

汪书亮

2011年雨花台区一模作文 2006年南通中考作文

假如你是李华。你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部(Helping Hands Club)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部,请根据下面表 格和图片的内容,用英语写一封自荐信。 (10分) 姓 名 李华 性 别 男

本人 身体健康;学习刻苦;乐于助人;与同学友好相处 特点 “爱心” 表现 加入 目的 1. …… ; 2. ……

要求:1. 表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯; 2. 要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息,但不得 使用真实姓名和校名等; 3. 表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟; 4. 词数:80左右。信的开头与结尾已给出,不计 入总词数。 Dear Chairman, I am a boy student from Class 1, Grade 3. I’d like to be a member of the Helping Hands Club. ____________________________________________ ____________________________________________ I will be glad if I am received. I am waiting for your answer. Yours, Li Hua

2008年南京市中考题

下面是一份英语学习自我评价表,每个评价项目后有若 干个选项。请在符合自己实际情况的选项方框中打√(可 以多选)。根据你的选择,以“My English Learning”为 题写一篇短文,介绍你英语学习中的优势与不足,并针对 自己的不足之处,提出改进方法。(15分) 注意:1.语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 2.词数80左右。短文开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 English Learning Self-assessment 1. The new words I can remember: □ all □ most □ some □ several 2. My favourite activities: □ pair work □ writing □ doing grammar exercises □ learning new vocabulary □ class discussions

3. The most difficult part in English learning: □ reading □ listening □ grammar □ vocabulary □ speaking □ writing 4. The useful ways in English learning: □ keeping a vocabulary notebook □ taking an active part in class discussions □ doing English duty reports □ reading texts aloud □ preparing lessons carefully before class 5. Need to be improved in learning areas: □ listening □ reading □ speaking □ writing □ grammar □ vocabulary □ pronunciation □ working with others My English Learning English is a very important subject at school.____________________________________________

少一个要点 卷面整洁 没有分段

-3

9
状语从句

-1 没有运用合适的过渡词语

结尾不够充实

句子错误

-1

-1

复合句:
状语从句
宾语从句 定语从句
时间 条件 目的 原因 结果 让步

when, while, as, before… if, unless in order that, so that because as a result, so…that… although/though

2009年南京市中考作文
假如你是来自美国威尔斯中学的交换学生Simon,即将 回校开始高中学业。学校要求高一学生必须修满9个学 分(Credit)的课程,除学校规定的6个学分的必修课 (Re

quired Course)外,你还得自选3个学分的选修课 (Elective Course)。请从学校提供的选修科目中,选择 几门课程,修满3个学分。给学校写一封信,陈述你所选 择的选修科目及选择的理由。(15分) 注意:1.信中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 2. 内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯。 3. 词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词教

PROGRAM OF STUDIES FOR WELLS HIGH SCHOOL( 2009—2010) FRESHMAN Required Courses Code Credit
English Mathematics Science 0101 0201 0301 1.50 1.50 1.00 1.00 0.50 0.50

United States Studies 0401 Personal Finance Health 0501 0601

Elective Courses
Home Economics Singing Physical Education Computer Studies

Code
0701 0801 0901 1001

Credit
0.50 1.00 1.50 1.50

Dear Sir/Madam , I am pleased to return to the school next term. I will choose ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ ______________________________________ _______________________________ Yours sincerely, Simon

8

卷面不整洁

-1
审题不清

-2

动词形式错误 句子结构错误

-1

-1

句子结构错误 书写不规范

动词形式错误

-1
漏词

结尾不够充实

-1

中考作文评分细则:
1. 能写明全部要点,语言基本无误或有少量拼写 错误,行文流畅,表达清楚, 得15分 2.只写出部分单词,无可读句子,得2-3分 3.语法(时态、人称、语态等)错误扣1分,同类错

误不重复扣分
4.拼写、大小写、标点等小错误三个扣1分 5.词数少于70或多于120,扣1分 6.字迹不工整,扣1分 7.没有分段,扣1分

8.文章结尾不充实,扣1-2分
9.没有过渡词或合适运用从句,酌情扣1分

2010年扬州中考作文精彩语句:
First, we should often communicate with our parents.
Second, tell them what we think instead of fighting

with them.
Third, pay more attention to our study.

过渡词语
时间顺序: first, second, third …,next, afterwards, then, finally/at last

In a word, it’s important for us to get along well with
our parents.

总结:
finally,at last,in the end, in a word as a result , therefore, in all
In order to improve our marks, we are not allowed to play games, go out with friends on weekends.

目的: for the purpose; so that; in order to

2010 镇江中考作文精彩语句:
As post-90s students, we have so many advantages.

On the other hand, we also have some disadvantages

转折:

but,however,on the other hand
Most of us can work hard in class and play happily after class. In addition, we are obviously imaginative.

递进: what’s more, in addition, as well

2009年苏州中考作文精彩语句:
You are learning all the time. For example,

learning can happen when you go to a museum.

列举: for e

xample, such as, like

2008年盐城中考作文精彩语句:
I think Chinese paper cuts are not only beautiful
but also very useful.

并列: not only…but also, and, or

2010年南京英语中考作文:
假如你是王林,你的美国朋友Daniel将来南京学习,他想 请根据海报中的信息,给他发一封电子邮件,介绍滨江图

了解所到中学附近的滨江图书馆(Binjiang Public Library)

书馆的情况及部分馆区的功能。(15分)
注意:(1)电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 (2)语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。 (3)词数80左右。电子邮件的开头已经给出,不计 入总词数。

Binjiang Public Library Over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals Location:18 Binjiang Road, Jianye District Open:8:00a.m.(Mon-Fri.)9:00a.m.(Sat & Sun.) Closed:5:00p.m.(Mon-Fri.)8:00p.m.(Sat & Sun.) Sections: Loan Desk(借书处), Reading Room, Computing Room, Electronic Resource(资源), Children’s Story Corner, Book Shop… Functions: ●borrow & return books ●search for information on the Internet ●… Dear Daniel, I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. _____________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Wang Lin

Try to write now!

作文评分细则: 请划出错误,并写出扣分原因!
1. 能写明全部要点,语言基本无误或有少量拼写 错误,行文流畅,表达清楚, 得15分 2.只写出部分单词,无可读句子,得2-3分 3.语法(时态、人称、语态等)错误扣1分,同类错

误不重复扣分
4.拼写、大小写、标点等小错误三个扣1分 5.词数少于70或多于120,扣1分 6.没有过渡词或合适运用从句,酌情扣1分 7.字迹不工整,扣1分

8.没有分段,扣1分
9.文章结尾不充实,扣1-2分

范文

Dear Daniel, I’m pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. Here’s some information about Binjiang Public Library. The library, located at 18 Binjiang Road, has over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals. It is open from 8:00 a.m. to 5:00p.m. on weekdays. On weekends it is open for 11 hours. It is a good place for people to read and borrow books. There are different sections in the library. You can not only borrow and return books at Loan Desk, but also read newspapers and magazines in Reading Room. If you want to search for information on the Internet, you can go to Computing Room. You can also buy some new books in Book Shop. I believe you will find the library useful. Yours sincerely, Wang Lin

写作诀窍:

要点 齐全 错误 回避 逻辑 清晰 字迹 工整

写作复习建议:
1.梳理教材,熟悉各模块内容及话题
2.掌握各种形式作文的写作技巧

3.牢记四会词汇,掌握各单元的重要短语和句
子,熟悉过渡词和各类复合句

4.养成写作前列提纲或流程图的好习惯
5.考前一个月多练习写作

Homework:
Write a complaint letter about your robot.
《中考指导

书》 P129

Thank you!


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