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中考英语作文指导之改错

发布时间:2014-03-03 19:10:25  

新年词汇
春 节 Spring Festival 拜年 pay a new year visit 爆竹鞭炮 firecracker 除夕Eve of Chinese New Year 春联Spring couplets 辞旧迎新ring out the old year and ring in the new year 饺子Jiaozi 庙会temple fair 鸣钟辞旧岁ring out the old year 年画(traditional )New Year pictures 年夜饭the Eve feast; 年终大扫除Year-end household cleaning 守岁stay up late on the New Year's Eve 团圆饭family reunion dinner 压岁lucky money,gift money 舞龙dragon dance

一、Language errors in writing 纠错

1.

be多余或缺少

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I’m enjoy studying English.

I enjoy studying English.
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It bad for our health.

It is bad for our health.

2. 时态错误
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At that time, they always help me with my English.

At that time, they always helped me with my English.

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I had enjoyed studying English since I meet him.

I have enjoyed studying English since I met him.

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My favorite sport is run.

My favorite sport is running.

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I think do some sports is very important for us.

I think doing some sports is very important for us.

3. 非谓语动词错误
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I like do sports.

I like doing sports.
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I wish take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.

I wish to take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.

4. 副词位置错误

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I very thank her.

I thank her very much.

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I very like football.

I like football very much.

5. 代词错误
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They are good for us body.

They are good for our body.
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I hope me also become a basketball player.

I hope I also become a basketball player.

6. 缺介词或介词错误
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I thank him very much help me study English.

I thank him very much for helping me study English.
He even came to my home for help me.

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He even came to my home to help me.

7. 其他错误
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I like it because it’s exciting and good for my healthy.

(单词错误) I like it because it’s exciting and good for my health. (动词P.P.错误)

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I have ever gived up English.

I have ever given up English.

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It’s good for my health. Not only make me brave, but also make me become taller.(缺主语)

It’s good for my health. It not only makes me brave, but also makes me become taller.
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If you want to keep fit, it important for you to take an hour to sports every day.(句型错误)

If you want to keep fit, it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day.

Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.
1. I climed slowly and was very tried. tired climbed

Spelling(拼写)

2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped somebody sb. unforgettable (others) 3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. Friday Capital letter(大小写) 4. I can’t forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.I can’t forget that day because 5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it ! forever. Punctuation(标点符号)

Find out the mistakes in the

following sentences and correct them.
6. I will remembered that day forever. remember
7. I thought it is hungry. was 8. My grandmother always tidy up my room. Verb agreement (主谓一致) tidies 9. How unforgettable this things is! thing Word form (词形)

Tense(时态)

Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.
Phrases(短语和固定搭配) 10. In my father’s help, I became more patient than before. With my father’s help, 11. To cut a long story to short, …. To cut a long story short,… 12. I went to Guiyang by a bus with my mother. by bus 13. My mother told me don’t give it up. told me not to give it up 14. I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road. saw an old lady lying…

Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.
15. I sat on a seat , listening music. listening to

Missing words(漏词)

16. We played snow in front of house. the house played with 17. Then a lady asked who had broken her window. We all were afraid. were all Words’ order(词序) 18. We should do things by our own hands. with Using wrong word(选词错误) 19. It is tired work. tiring

Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.
Chinese English(中式英语) 20. In my life have many things happened. In my life, many things happened. 21. One Sunday morning, I went to Guiyang by bus and sat beside me was a girl. I went to Guiyang on a bus and there was a girl sitting beside me. 22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart. carefully

Check and correct this article.
The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays. During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of a lot of things happened. the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my helping friends and me shopping in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl I were shopping cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she crying happened to cuond’t found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her find , so help her couldn’t find mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and . They we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others. could also

Common Errors in English writing
1. 是否有大小写错误(capital letters or lowercase letters) 2. 是否有拼写错误 (spelling mistakes) 3. 是否有标点错误 (punctuation mistakes) 4.是否有语法错误 (grammar mistakes) ? 主谓是否一致 ? 动词的时态 ? 语态的使用是否正确 ? 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯



1.字迹乱,划痕较多,字字不踩线。高低错落。 2.字迹或太大,显得不紧凑;或太小,太密,看不 清,占不满格。 3 字数太多,显得太罗嗦,出格就看不见了。 字数太少,空太多格,会被误认为字数不够,不会 得高分。

规范三写:大 小 写,拼 写,书 写

实战训练
以“M

y English Teacher”为题写一 篇100字左右的英语短文,提示如下: 1 孙老师,25岁,1.65米, 打扮入时。 2 关心热爱学生 。 3 教学方法生动有趣。 4 与学生关系融洽,深受同学欢迎;

Pre-writing 1.审: “My English Teacher” 为题写
一篇100字作文 2.定: 记叙文,第三人称,一般现在时 篇章结构:三段式 首段:个人简历 正文:教学特色 尾段:作者的评价

Writing: 3.列

1.打扮入时 be fashionable
2.热爱学生,关心学生
love students, and care about the students

3.生动有趣 be lively and interesting 4.相处融洽,深受欢迎 get on well with…,be popular with…

Writing 4.连:连词成句,连句成篇
My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. ①She is very fashionable.②She loves her students. She cares about us. ③Her lessons are interesting and lively; ④ Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !

复写Rewriting: 5、美——润色丰富要点;
6、改——查错改错

7、抄——修改无误后,认真规范
地誊写在规定的地方。

My English Teacher
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Miss Sun, our English teacher, is 25 years old, and 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable. Since she loves us and cares about our needs, she is very helpful in our daily life, Not only is she helpful in life, but also her teaching methods are unique. For example, she knows how to make her lessons lively and interesting and we are crazy about her lessons; Besides, Miss Sun gets on well with us and she is very popular among students. In a word, Miss Sun is a unique teacher, and we all love her and her teaching!

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1.考试=坐公车
?赶上车的人——欣赏沿途的风景,

更有甚者,已经换乘其它的车, 奔向更远的目的地 ?没赶上的人——羡慕,懊悔,捶 胸顿足,仰天长叹……于事无补

Homework
? 以“A person

I Will Never Forget”为题,写 一篇英语短文。
爱好和使你难忘之处.

? 要求:1.短文内容应包括人物外貌、性格、 ? 2:短文中不得出现真实的校名人名。

? 3:词数80左右。

A person I Will Never Forget
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The person I will never forget is my English teacher. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. As a great sports fun, he likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Moreover, he is humorous and he always makes his classes lively and interesting. So we really have fun having his classes.

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Besides, he’s not only very kind to us, but also strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. For instance, he often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding. With his endless patience and great help, My English has improved a lot. To sum up, my English teacher is the person who has a great influence both on my studies and on my daily life. I w

ill never forget him in all my life.

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