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九年级中考写作训练

发布时间:2014-05-27 14:05:40  

中考复习

书面表达训练策略
郑 州 八中 张瑞

(衢州,2012)
假设你是李华,上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请 根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing” 的英语短文,参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。 A pleasant outing 上周末 你和…… 北山公园(the North Hill Park) 骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏…… ……

时间 参加者 地点 活动 感受

主要问题
1.层次不清晰 2. 拼写和语法错误多

3. 汉语思维痕迹过重

A pleasant Outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. We had a great time. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy. What a pleasant outing it was!

A pleasant Outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. We had a great time. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy. What a pleasant outing it was!

A pleasant Outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. We had a great time. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, that we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, Later some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy. What a pleasant outing it was!

写作评分标准
(一档:13-15分) 内容完整 结构清晰 语言无


--依据新课标5级

中考复习

书面表达训练策略
语言正确性与难度专练

好语言的标准 句子正确 2-4个句子加难度

化繁为简 化简为繁

确保正确

加大难度

化繁为简
返璞归真:

确保正确

A. 简单英语表达复杂汉语思维 B.每句话都争取用:主+谓+宾 (主+系+表)

(09年郑州二测 )

请用“返璞归真”的思维用英语表达下列各句: 1. 科目选择性强 Teenagers can choose many subjects. There are many subjects for students to choose. 2. 英语水平提高快 Teenagers can improve their English fast. 3. 与世界各国学生交流 Teenagers can talk with

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