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中考英语作文讲评课(上海版)

发布时间:2014-06-03 14:28:15  

Leaving school(毕业时分) Growing pains and gains(成长的烦恼与欢乐) I have a dream(我有一个梦想) Things I hate to do(我不喜欢。。。) Love around me(我身边的爱)

I want to do something for my school(我为学校做件事)
I’m proud of myself(我为自己感到自豪) 1. 与生活相关 2. 与“我”相关

Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". ( 以“最能使 我快乐的方法”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的 短文,标点符号不占格) The following points are for your reference: (所给提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)

内容(7分)+语言(8分)+文采(3分)
一、认真审题,结构合理
*写什么 (题目,参考问题)

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What should we write about? What shouldn’t we (only) write about? 1. My school life 2. My dream teacher 3. The thing I hate to do 4. My opinions of keeping pet dogs 5.The best way to make me happy

内容(7分)+语言(8分)+文采(3分)
一、认真审题,结构合理
*写什么 (题目,参考问题)

Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)

The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons)

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The best way to make me happy is achieving good marks. I think this way is the best one to make me happy because it is the easiest ways and it can improve my ability so I think it is the best way. In this way, I can get some prizes, so I will feel happy, what’s more it can also make my parents happy.

The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at 内容不全 least two reasons)

there are a lot of ways to make me happy. The best way to make me happy is to play basketball. To play computer games is also a way to make me happy. Everyday we have PE lesson. These are a lot of interests in it. So I feel happy in this way.

The following points are for your reference: (所给 提示仅供参考) 1. What are the ways to make you happy? 2. Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? 3. Why do you feel happy in this way? (give at least two reasons) the best way to make me happy is to help another. When I feel sad, I can help another, because I hope the others happy. I can help old p

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