2.、高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。但遇到不会翻译的怎么办？ 如：帮助同学，可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢？怎么不换个说法呢？你看，If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our friendship longer .不就达到目的了吗？同一个意思有很多种表达方式！耐心一些，一定会写出来！
4.全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，。如：you should, 你可以用you supposed to ,you’d better do ,why not 等 说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常、老师自然就对该作文有好感了。
5，段与段之间，句与句之间，有合适的连接词自然过渡，如，firstly,secondly ,what is more,however, in a word.
6，一些常用句型，it is said that… it seems that …it is necessary that ……we should try our best to do not only…but also In my opinion, …如果你不……，你就会…… If you don't ..., you'll ...
1.such as 列举跟名词，或doing
for example 举事例
3， 可数名词不能单独使用，要么有复数，要么前面加a /an /the
1. Every coin has two sides. 每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。
2. Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。
3.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，不用请医生。
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries.（日记）
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
2.保持健康 The ways to stay healthy
Health is the most important for any of us. In order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.
Firstly, we should pay attention to the diet. It’s best to eat lots of fruit and vegetables.“ An apple a day keeps the doctor away,” so fruit is good for health. Besides, we are not supposed to have a lot of junk food. Secondly, exercise is necessary. On the one hand, we are not easy to get fat. On the other hand, we can be stronger.Finally, we’d better have good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night, and never work too hard. What’s more, we must stay away from cigarettes.
In a word, these are things we’d better follow if we want to stay healthy.
3.如何跟别人相处 How to get on well with others
As we all know, students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share（分享） our happiness and sadness.What's more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat （对待）others in an honest （诚实的） way. Only in these ways can we get along well.
4. 6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重?假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛，要求：(1)、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;(2)、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，字数80左右。
As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places, we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment.
But what can we do? How to protect our environment ? For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags（塑料袋） when we go shopping ,and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .
In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment ,there will be less pollution and our life will be better. “There is only one earth”. I hope everyone will protect our environment well.
1.节水节电；2.垃圾分类；3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。 Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water is also very important. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, and we might recycle some of them. What’s more, we suggest using handkerchiefs （手帕）instead of paper so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes（贡献） to a cleaner world.
6.人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由 1.广交朋友 2.可自由表达思想 3.有利于外语学习反对的理由 1.浪费时间 2.影响学习 3.可能上当受骗 你的看法是?
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. They think Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even it can improve their foreign language.
Others, however, think students should not. They think making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated（欺骗） on line.
It is my opinion that students should place 放置their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.