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2014年 中考英语 作文得分王道

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英语作文得分王道

一.英语写作的方式

Beginning :topic sentence主题句

Body:Supporting sentence 支持句(例子、实事、数据或引文)

Ending:Concluding sentence 结论句

二.写作技巧

方法一:善用高级词汇

方法二:活用多种句型

方法三:妙用关联词

方法四:妙用引文和例子

三.写作步骤

一审(search,审要点);二列(list列与要点相关简单的句子);三加(add,加首尾加首尾,使结构完整,可以采取总分总结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮); 四连(connect,加上恰当的关联词,连句成篇);五美(beautify用前面介绍的写作技巧美化文章,提高文章档次)

以下面例子做参照:

健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。

根据图形比例依次是: travel ;visit friends or parents;stay at home;work

第一步;审要点:如何度过假期 调查报告 提倡大家进行假日休闲。

第二步:列简单句:A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

第三步:加首尾:

(首)How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.

A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the

internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

(尾)Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 第四步:连句成篇:

How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.

According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.

Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well

第五步:充分运用写作技巧提高文章档次:

We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report

According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the

holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have

a good rest. However, a few people have to work.

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

附加四项:

一:善用高级词汇

1 我们很累。A We were very tired. B We were really exhausted.

2 他们在海滩上听音乐。

A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.

3 我希望你能帮助我。 A 。I hope you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help. 4 我们应该努力取得好成绩。

A We should work hard to get good grades.

B We’re supposed to try our best to get good grades.

5 我不吃垃圾食品。

A I don’t eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.

6 他们很早就到了。

A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.

7 我们在海里游泳,很开心。

A We swam in the sea. We were happy. B We had fun swimming in the sea.

8 最后,他的狗得救了,他感到很惊讶。

A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.

B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last

方法二:活用多种句型

1 我喜欢轻音乐,它可以使我放松。

A I like quiet music. It can make me relaxed.

B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.

2 雨下得很大,所以他没赶上校车。

A It rained heavily. So he didn’t catch the school bus.

B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.

3 她还小,搬不动这么重的箱子。

She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.

B She is too young to carry the heavy box.

4 我们必须采取措施来拯救地球,这样才能过上更好的生活

A We must do something to help save the earth. Then we will have a better life.

B The more we do to help save our planet, the better life we will have

5 我认为学英语很有趣。

A I think learning English is interesting.

B I find it really fun to learn English .

6 我们应该在英语课上记笔记。

A .We should take notes in English classes. B. Taking notes in English classes is necessary.

三:关联词(connection words)

1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor

2.表示选择: or, either…or

3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway

4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result

5.表示条件: if , unless

6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,

on the one hand…on the other hand

7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,

that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth

8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end

9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact

10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,

generally speaking, in short

四:加谚语

若表达锻炼对学生有好处,可说As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.

若想表达集中注意力于学习,可说As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...

若想表达加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,可说As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

请同学们牢记以下谚语并灵活运用:

1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 2.Think twice before you do.三思而后行。

3.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。

4.Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。 5.The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有吃。

6.Failure is the mother of success 失败是成功之母

7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。

8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果, 医生远离我。

9.All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。

10. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy只会用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻

11.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。

12.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。

13.It's never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老

14.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。

五:加例子

青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。

We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.

在家里,我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。

I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.

六:结尾提出倡议或号召

As students, we should start from ourselves.

Don’t wait. Join us now!

Start to join us now!

Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!

How amazing! I can’t wait!

Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!

Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!

The Life as a Grade 9 Student

七.优秀范文两篇

(一)描述自己九年级的生活

How time flies! Now I’m in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! !

There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days.

Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.

I’ll spend the rest time efficiently. As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!

(二)随着人口的增多,人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住,而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地;新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地;许多动物遭到猎杀······所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友,我们有责任去保护他们,而不是伤害或猎杀它们。

请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。

要求:

1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整;

2.提示的内容要全部用上。

Let’s Help Our Friends

With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a result, we change the forests into farmland. More and more new cities and roads are built on animals’ habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Don’t you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So it’s our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.

Don’t put it off!Let’s try our best to help our friends today!

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