Beginning ：topic sentence主题句
Body：Supporting sentence 支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文）
Ending：Concluding sentence 结论句
根据图形比例依次是： travel ；visit friends or parents；stay at home；work
第一步；审要点：如何度过假期 调查报告 提倡大家进行假日休闲。
第二步：列简单句：A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
（首）How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the
internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
（尾）Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. 第四步：连句成篇：
How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the
holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have
a good rest. However, a few people have to work.
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
1 我们很累。A We were very tired. B We were really exhausted.
A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.
3 我希望你能帮助我。 A 。I hope you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help. 4 我们应该努力取得好成绩。
A We should work hard to get good grades.
B We’re supposed to try our best to get good grades.
A I don’t eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.
A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.
A We swam in the sea. We were happy. B We had fun swimming in the sea.
A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.
B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last
A I like quiet music. It can make me relaxed.
B I prefer gentle music that can make me relaxed.
A It rained heavily. So he didn’t catch the school bus.
B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.
She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box.
A We must do something to help save the earth. Then we will have a better life.
B The more we do to help save our planet, the better life we will have
A I think learning English is interesting.
B I find it really fun to learn English .
A .We should take notes in English classes. B. Taking notes in English classes is necessary.
1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in short
若表达锻炼对学生有好处，可说As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.
若想表达集中注意力于学习，可说As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
若想表达加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法，可说As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.
1.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。 2.Think twice before you do.三思而后行。
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
4.Do as the Romans do.入乡随俗。 5.The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有吃。
6.Failure is the mother of success 失败是成功之母
7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水难收。
8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。
9.All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。
10. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻
11.God helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。
12.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
13.It's never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老
14.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.
I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.
As students, we should start from ourselves.
Don’t wait. Join us now!
Start to join us now!
Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!
How amazing! I can’t wait!
Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!
Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!
The Life as a Grade 9 Student
How time flies! Now I’m in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! !
There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days.
Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.
I’ll spend the rest time efficiently. As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!
Let’s Help Our Friends
With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a result, we change the forests into farmland. More and more new cities and roads are built on animals’ habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Don’t you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So it’s our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.
Don’t put it off！Let’s try our best to help our friends today!