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中考英语作文讲解

发布时间:2013-10-05 18:15:59  

写作第八次课
how to introduce your vacation plan?

南昌新东方 李伟

What is a “plan”?
? 亲爱的同学们,你们即将初中毕业了,也即将迎来一 个两个月的假期。请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的 暑假计划。 ? 要点如下:1.你将在哪里度过你的假期;2.至少写出 你将要做的三件事。 ? 写作要求:1.短文在80词左右;2.短文必须包括以上 要点,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;3.文中不得出 现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息;4.短文开头已经给 出,不计入总词数。 ? 参考短语: summervacation,relaxoneself,housework,visit,old friends and relatives

2012年同类作文题
? 青海卷; ? 乌鲁木齐卷 ? 杭州卷

命题要求
? 文体:说明文; ? 结构:三段式; ? 人称:第一人称; ? 信息点:心情(怀旧、展望)、假期计

划安排(学习、生活体验、娱乐)。

写作思路
? 第一段:回顾一下过去的收获,导入话题; ? 第二段:详细介绍假期的打算; ? 第三段:回到自己,表示期待。

范文
? This term is coming into an end and holiday is coming. I feel happy and excited at the thought that I will be able to plan a vacation belongs to me! In order to make the holiday wonderful, I make plans below. ? Firstly, I want to find a part-time job. Though working may make me tired, it can let me know more about the society and hardship of my parents. Secondly, I will do some reading. I like reading not because it can enrich my knowledge but because it gives me relaxation. Besides, I will do some interesting things to have a good rest. Listening to music, shopping, surfing the Internet and going out to do some sports are my choices. If time allows, I will also take a trip with my family. ? I must control myself well so that I won’t waste the precious holiday-time. For me, every day of the holiday can be different, and I can’t wait to enjoy it!

第一段

? This term is coming into an end and holiday is coming. I feel happy and excited at the thought that I will be able to plan a vacation belongs to me! In order to make the holiday wonderful, I make plans below.

第二段
? Firstly, I want to find a part-time job. Though working may make me tired, it can let me know more about the society and hardship of my parents. Secondly, I will do some reading. I like reading not because it can enrich my knowledge but because it gives me relaxation. Besides, I will do some interesting things to have a good rest. Listening to music, shopping, surfing the Internet and going out to do some sports are my choices. If time allows, I will also take a trip with my family.

第三段
? I must control myself well so that I won’t waste the precious holiday-time. For me, every day of the holiday can be different, and I can’t wait to enjoy it!

重点句型
? I feel … at the thought that … ? I want to/like

… not because … but

because … ? If time allows, I will … ? Although …, it can …

课后作业

? 杭州卷作文

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