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2013 中考写作

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writing

I want_____
I Want to Have A Robot

What to write?

列要点

1. help me with housework 2. play chess with me 3. wake me up in the morning 4. make me happy 5. deal with something difficult for me

How to write? 1、把短语扩展为句子,注意时态。 1. A robot can help me with housework. 2. He can play chess with me. 3. He can wake me up in the morning. 4. He can make me happy. 5. He can deal with something difficult for me.

2. 丰富句子,适当增加连词和句子。 1. A robot can help me with housework when I am busy. 2. He can play chess with me after school. ( at weekend, in my spare time…) 3. He can wake me up in the morning so that I can get to school on time. Because I am always late for school, I need a robot to wake me up in the morning.

4. If I meet something boring, he will make me happy.
5. At last, he can deal with something difficult for me like a father.

3. 初步形成短文。写好开头句和结尾句 I want to have my own robot I hope I’ll have my own robot in the future. I think if I have a robot, he can help me with housework when I am busy. He can play chess with me after school. And more, because I am always late for school, I especially need a robot to wake me up in the morning. If I meet something boring, he will make me happy. At last, he can deal with something difficult for me like a father. I want to have my own robot so much. I believe my life will be colorful, if I have a robot. I can’t wait to have one.

4、通读全文,检查、改错。

1、题目和内容一致。 2、句子结构是否正确。 主---系---表; 主---谓---宾 3、人称 4、时态 5、固定搭配 6、单词拼写 7、标点符号

五步写作法
步骤一:列要点 步骤二:造简单句 步骤三:扩展句子 步骤四:连句成篇

步骤五:通读全文, 检查、改错。

1、确定新的学习目标; 2、改进学习方法; 3、学会独立生活; 4、参加各种课外活动; 5、处理好与同学的关系。

Writing

步骤一:列要点 1. set a new target for learning / find a better way to study my lessons 2. improve my study method / learning skills / ways of learning 3. learn how to live on my own 4. take part in different kinds of after— class activities 5. get on well with my classmates

步骤二:造简单句 1. I would like to set a new target for my studies. 2. I want to improve my study method / learning skills / ways of learning. 3. I am willing to learn how to live on my own 4. I plan to take part in different kinds of after—class activities 5. I hope that I can get on well with my classmates

书面表达训练
1、单词、短语、句子分类记忆。 好词、好句的背诵。 2、简单句的翻译训练。

healthy; heavy; important; impossible; interested/ interesting; last; late; lively lonely; lovely; lucky; mad; national; natural; nervous; noisy, pale; patient; perfect; personal; plastic; pleasant/ pleased; polite; poor; popular

; pretty; proud; quiet ready; recent; serious; sick; silly; similar simple; sleepy; soft; spare; special; strange; strict; stupid; successful; sure; stressed tidy; tired/ tiring; true, usual; wise; wonderful;

关于“健康”这一话题,可归纳如下词块:

fall ill; keep fit; have a physical examination; keep a balanced diet; do exercise; give up smoking; get into the good habit of; Early to bed, early to rise. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. Health is above wealth. …


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