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中考英语作文2

发布时间:2013-11-07 13:34:55  

初中英语书面表达 写作技巧指导

写作第一步



? 认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心。


健康很重要。在学习和 工作的压力日趋增大的 今天,会休息的人才会 有健康的身体。人们是 如何度过假期的呢?国 际健康组织对此作了一 次调查,右图是他们此 次的调查结果。根据你 所得的信息,请为国际 健康组织写一篇完整的 调查报告,并提倡大家 进行假日休闲。

travel stay at home

visit friends or parents work

写作第二步



? 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要 点。

根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句 子列出文章的要点
? 如何度假 ? 调查报告 ? 倡议假日休闲

travel stay at home

visit friends or parents work


? A lot of people travel . ? Some people stay at home. ? Some other people visit friends or parents. ? A few people work. ? Enjoy your vacation.

How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.

a nice head

A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

a nice body
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

a nice tail

写作第三步:



? 加首尾,使结构完整。
? 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构, 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂 亮。

? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. ? A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.

写作第四步:



? 恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清 晰,各个部分衔接自然。

关联词
1.表示并列或递进: both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor; 2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: firstly, second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: what’s more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: in a word, generally speaking,

Let’s pLay the game.
? _____ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. ? He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert _____. ? We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. ? _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.


? How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. ? According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. People who re

lax well work well.


? We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. ? According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. ? Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

写作第五步:



? 选好词句,美化文章。在有把握的情 况下展示自己的语言功底。

Skill One Make your sentences correct
? ? ? ? ? Good good study, day day up. We should do sports aonce a week week once. Saving the environment is our duty. Save be There is going to have a meeting today. achieve I hope I can come true my dream.

Skill Two Express in different ways
Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study. The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldn’t eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. It’s important to learn English grammar.

书面表达写作技巧











中考作文评分标准

第一档(13-15分) 信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。 第二档(10-12分) 信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表 达。 第三档(7-9分) 能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。 第四档(4-6分) 只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。 第五档(1-3分) 只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。

书面表达
? 以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。 ? Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型 供参考) ? My dream is to be…/to do…/to go… ? I enjoy /like/prefer… ? To make my dream come true, I … ? If my dream comes true…

Passage One

I have a dream Have you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, it’s my dream to be a professional bike rider. I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, I’ve been riding for 5 years. Some people think it’s dangerous, I don’t think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is! To make my dream come true, I’ll practice more after middle school. Also, I’ll watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I can enjoy the life I like best.

Passage Two

I have a dream Anybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams. Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special

, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire they’re free, they can do everything they want. When they’re flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even they’re the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it won’t be achieved any more. It’s just a dream, in my heart.

Passage Three I have a dream
My dream is to be a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I

need take some time to do it. I need practice
every day. If my dream come true, I will more thy to do it.


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