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Is writing hard? 一篇作文由句子组成 一个句子由单词组成

词- 句子- 作文

Miss QQ

Model

1.Key word:
关键动词

sing

2.Tense(时态): 现在进行时

造句:
now Miss QQ is singing now.

1.Key word: sing 2.Tense(时态):一般过去时

造句:
yesterday
She sang yesterday.

Model:

1.Key word: sing 2.Tense(时态): 一般将来时 造句: tomorrow She will sing tomorrow.

Spring
1.Key word: run

2.Tense(时态): 现在进行时 now

造句:
She is running now.

1.Key word: run

2.Tense(时态): 一般现在时
every day

造句:

Miss. QQ/ She runs every day.

1.Key word: run
2.Tense(时态): 一般过去时

造句:
Last Sunday

Mr. QQ

Miss QQ ran last Sunday. She ran last Sunday.

造句:
Last Sunday

Mr. QQ ran last Sunday. He ran last Sunday.

1.Key word: run 2.Tense: 一般现在时

sometimes 造句:
Mr. QQ and Miss QQ run sometimes. They run sometimes.

1.Key word: dance 2.Tense: 过去进行时
at eight last night

造句:

He was dancing at eight last night.

1.Key word:

cook

2.Tense: 一般将来时 造句:
next evening

He will cook next evening.

1.Key word: eat / have 2.Tense: 现在进行时

at this moment

造句:

The girl is eating/ having a meal at this moment.

1.Key word: swim

2.Tense?

根据提示写英文日记:

1、4月1日天气晴朗 2、跟同学们骑车去海边 3、一个老人在海里游泳 4、虽然有点冷,但玩得很开心 1.Key word(画线部分): swim

2.Tense: 一般过去时
画线部分造句:

An old man swam in the sea.

假如你是班长,班里要举行一次活动 请根据提示写一份英语通知 活动时间 4月15日 活动 去海里游泳 交通方式 注意事项 骑自行车 不要迟到, 自带午饭和饮料

画线部分造句:

1.Key word (画线部分): swim 2.Tense: 一般将来时

We are going to /will swim in the sea. We will go swimming in the sea.

根据以下有关Tom个人情况,写一篇 介绍他的短文。

姓名:Tom 年龄:16 国籍:英国 职业:学生 经常做的运动: 游泳 理想:当一个作家

画线部分造句:

1.Key word: swim 2.Tense: 一般现在时

Tom often swims. He often goes swimming.

Summary(总结): How to begin writing? Step 1: Look carefully and find the key words
仔细审题,找出关键动词

Step 2: Decide which tense to use 确定时态、人称
Let’s move to Step 3!

2

Yesterday, Jim and Lucy were on their way home.…

summer Model:

Tense:一般过去时
Key words: talk walk carry…

yesterday

造句:

They talked happily. An old woman walked in front of them. She carried a basket of apples. …

Task(任务):讨论余下每幅画的关键动词并造句, 四个同学一组,准备:2 minutes

Key words: fall down… 造句:…

Key words: 造句:…

help…to stand up

pick up…

Key words:

help …carry go home
say 造句:…

请将四幅画连贯起来,形成一篇 作文来

Step3:

We need an outline (

提纲):

1. talk / carry 1.老人拎一篮苹果 2.老人摔倒,苹果掉地 2. fall down 3. help...stand up 3.帮忙捡水果,扶老人 / pick up 4.送老人回家 4. help / go

参考作文:
Yesterday, Jim and Lucy were on their way home. They talked happily. An old woman walked in front of them. She carried a basket of apples. Suddenly, the old woman fell down and the apples ran everywhere. Jim helped her to stand up and Lucy picked the apples up. Then they helped the old woman to go home. She was very thankful.

Step 1: Look carefully and find out the key words
仔细审题,找关键动词

Step 2: Decide which tense to use
确定时态、人称

Step 3: Make an outline
列提纲,以免遗漏要点

Step 4: Check and correct mistakes
检查订正

autumn 邮递员的一天
根据汉语提示,记叙一个邮递员 Mr. Smith的一天:
7:30 8:15 起床 刷牙洗脸 跟家人告别 公交车没赶上 一天的辛苦工作 回家

4:00

邮递员的一天
7:30 起床 刷牙洗脸

Key words:
get up brush / wash

say goodbye 8:15 跟家人告别 公交车没赶上 not catch/ miss 一天的辛苦工作 work hard
4:00 回家

go home/ return home

How many mistakes can you find in this composition?

In a Monday morning. Mr. Smith got up at seven thirty and put up the clothes. He wished face and tooth. It was a quertar past eight. He said goodbye to his wife. He didn’t catch the bus, because there were many people sat on the bus. He ran to work, he gave the letters to the people which waited for them. He goes home at four. He were tired, but he was happy.

简洁明了型:

It was seven thirty yesterday morning. Mr. Smith got up. He washed his face and brushed his teeth. At eight fifteen, he said goodbye to his family. Then he went to the bus stop. But when he got there, the bus had gone. So he had to walk to the post office. He worked very hard. At four, he came back home.

难度较大: Mr. Smith got up at half past seven on a Monday morning. After the breakfast, he said goodbye to his family and left home. Unluckily, by the time he arrived at the bus stop, the bus had already gone. So he had to walk to the post office and got letters which he should send. In the daytime, he was busy sending letters and newspapers from house to house. He didn’t return home until four o’clock. He was tired but happy.

in a Monday morning wrong on a Monday morning 扩展:in or on? 在早上/下午/晚上

in

the morning/ afternoon/ evening

在1991年 在四月份 在春天 在四月十三号 在周六

in 1991 in April in spring on April 13th on Saturday

归纳:1.早上、下午、晚上前加 年、月、季节前加 in 2.具体某一天前用 on 注意:有形容词修饰的早上、下午、 晚上前加 试试看: on

in

在一个寒冷的早晨 on a cold morning 在四月的一个夜晚 on an evening in April

词组搭配要牢记

put up 改为 put on
穿上 张贴 收拾

Do you know the meanings?

put on put up p

ut away

put off

推迟

Tips: 细心,仔细辨别哦

标点

. 改为,

标点书写规范:英文的句号是实心 点“.” 逗号与中文一致“,” 注意:当介词短语,状语从句放在 句首或句中时,它们后面应用逗号 如:她到校时,课已经开始了。 When she got to school had begun.

, the class

易混淆词: wished-- washed 1. 药: C A. medichine B. machine C.medicine
B A. brought B. bought C. boght 3. 骄傲的: A A. proud B. pround C. pound
2. 买(过去时):

4. 疲劳的:

A. tried
5. 天气:

B B. tired

C. tied

C A. whether B. wheather C. weather Tips: 平时记单词要精确,勿大意

名词变复数的特殊形式:
tooth-teeth

foot-- feet

woman-- women child--

children

sheep-- sheep

冠词勿忘

face前加his

Tips: 一般情况下,一个单数的普通名词 前都要有冠词或物主代词,指示代词。

如: 苹果在桌上。

Apple is on desk.

wrong

An apple is on the desk.

难词简化: quertar改成quarter a quarter= fifteen minutes
例:他是一个邮递员

He is a postman.
如果忘记了postman怎么写, 换种方式:

His job is to send letters and newspapers.

连词,及句子的连贯性

改为:He ran to work and he gave the letters…
注意:两个并列的单句之间一定要 有连词,如so, and, but等。

and 连接简单句表示并列或递进 but 连接的并列句表示转折 so 表示因果

天黑了,她回了家。

It was dark, she went home.
wrong

It was dark, so/and she went home.

which--

who

如果没有把握用复合句,就难句化简,尽量 用简单句。先求准确,再求文采。

例:Jim给了我一本他在上海买的书。

Jim gave me a book which he bought in Shanghai.
化简后:

Jim gave me a book. He bought it in Shanghai.

Tips:慎用there be 句型
例:很少有人懂英语。

把sat去掉

There are few people know English. wrong 改为:1. There are few people knowing English. 2. Few people know English.

Chinglish (中国英语) 造句: 在回家的路上,他发生了事故。 On his way home, he happened an accident. wrong 1.On his way home, he had an accident

2.On his way home, an accident happened to him.

Tips: 用自己熟练的地道表达方式, 不要生硬编造。

时态一致
He goes home.-He went home. 例:He read a book and takes some notes. 分析: read -- 一般过去时 takes-- 一般现在时

改为:He read a book and took some notes.

主谓一致:
He were tired.---

He was tired.

易错点:
Tom with his friends plays football every day. (play)

Tips:区分真正的主语

英文写作四步(中文表述):

Step 1: 仔细审题,找出关键动词

Step 2: 确定基调:时态、人称等 Step 3: 列提纲
Step 4: 认真检查

Gold tips: 1. 多用简单句,注意时态语态 2. 化难为易,化繁为简 3. 此路不通,绕道迂回

4. 字迹工整,留好印象
5. 卷面整洁

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