There has some different ideas about… There are some different ideas about… 正：There be…
? 误：When a middle school student, his parents were very strict with him. 正：When he was a middle school student, his parents were very strict with him.
? There are many boy bands around the world. Such as Super Junior M, Fei Lun Hai, Flower and so on. 正：There are many boy bands around the world, such as, Super Junior M, Fei Lun Hai, Flower and so on.
我累了。—— I'm tired.
? ? ? ? ? 误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo. 正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.
误 The apples cheap. I'll take some. 正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
? 误 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting. ? 正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
? 误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. ? 正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
? 误 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school. ? （这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独 立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误 ，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。） ? 正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词 不一致、主谓不一致等。 ? 误 When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do. （人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。） ? 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改 为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主 谓不一致。 ? 正 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants （to do）
? 误 When I get to the station the train leave. ? 正 When I got to the station the train had left.
? We all know that fail is the mother of succeed. ?We all know that failure is the mother of success.
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success successful successfully succeed
? ? ? ?
He got success. He was successful. He did it successfully. He succeeded.
? Make our city greener is important. ?Making our city greener is important.
? 人们可以通过因特网获得信息。 ? People can by the Internet to get information. ?People can get information through the Internet.
? 词语赘用就是在文章中使用了多余的 字（useless words），或用了大词 （big words），雅词（elegant words），形成了废话（dead word ），使文章组织不严密，内容模糊不 清。
? IPhone is a brand-new, cool, modern, entert
aining, smart high tech.
? People who are in Beijing are working hard for the 2008 Olympics.
?People in Beijing are working hard for the 2008 Olympics.
? 查字典 ? look up a dictionary ?看词性 ?看例句
? 百里挑一 ? one in a hundred ?one in a thousand
? 黄头发 ? yellow hair ?blond
? 白头发 ? white hair ?grey hair
White-collar Black tea Brown sugar Green house Blue mood
白领 红茶 红糖 温室 忧郁的情绪
? I call Li old big. toyear 25. ? My home four mouth people: papa, mama, I and DD. ? Please come to eat and sleep with me. ? From see you one eye, I love you. ? Your eyes close, I die; Your eyes open ,I come back alive. ? Your eyes close and open again and ? again ,I die again and again.
? 1. We have computer class one week a time. ? I have computer class once a week. ? 英语中表达频率次数时:一次 once, 两 次 twice 从三次开始用 three times ...
? 2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers. ? Going into my school, you can see many flowers. ? 这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作 由后面的you 发出.
? 3. There have 100 books. ? There are 100 books. ? 表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存 在句型. ? 4. I study there very happy. ? I study there very happily. ? Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词, 不可以用形容词happy.
? 5. I usually swimming there. ? I usually swim there. ? -ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.
? 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. ? By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall. ? 这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题. 如果单从中文意思 来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估 计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础 上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:
? 7. Several hours after, he was surprised. ? Several hours later, he was surprised. ? 使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.
? 8. He had to asked the other one. ? He had to ask the other one. ? “Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定 式后用动词原形.
? 9. He thought he speak well. ? He thought he spoke well. ? 这个句子属于语法时态的不一致. ? 10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing . ? Mr. Li is from Beijing . ? 一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词.
? 11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. ? He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese. ? 首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词, 但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他 工作很努力 He hardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个 两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副 词.
? 12. This film is very good-looking . ?
This film is very interesting. ? 这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一 般用来形容人物的.
? 13. It is very good to family look. ? It is fit for family to enjoy. ? 又是一个中文式的句子 ? 14. I think we can’t live Internet. ? I think we can’t rely on Internet. ? 学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.
? 15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people. ? Most people use the net to send the mails. ? 这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这 里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译. ? 16. I have a future dream. ? I have a dream about future. ? Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.
? 17. It can help me to walk on my life road. ? It can help me to walk on my life’s journey. ? “人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不 可用“road”来表达。 ? 18. I think everything must be change a lot. ? I think everything keeps on changing. ? 不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达 什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事 在变化的意思.
? 19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do. ? I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do. ? 宾语从句要使用正常语序.
? 20. But I singing not very well. ? But I don’t sing very well. ? 动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用.一般现 在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有 do来帮忙.
? 21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him. ? Tom’s mum didn’t care about him. ? Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾 语。 ? 22. Almost students use the computer not study. ? Most of the students use the computer not to study. ? 一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。
? 23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net. ? Most of people like sending mail in the internet. ? 这是一个中文式表达的句子。
? 24. When I was very small. ? When I was a little child. ? Small 用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里 要表达的“小孩子”的意思。