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作文模板--以‘吸烟有害健康’为例

发布时间:2013-12-20 14:31:25  

Harm of Smoking

Heart attack, lung cancer , cough, bad teeth

Scientific researches show that smoking can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problem. The World Health Organization says at least 2.5million people were killed by smoking each year.

Waste of money

Smoking pollutes the environment and may cause fire.

second-handed smoking is very harmful to passive smokers, especially to women and children.

Smoking is harmful to health. No smoking, our lives will have a brighter future.

例文: (问题阐述型)
? Today, smoking has brought a lot of harms in our daily life. (今天,现在吸烟给 我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。)/// Man is now facing a big problem –smoking. This problem is becoming more and more serious. (人类正面临着一个严重的问题— 吸烟,这个问题变得越来越严重。) I think smoking in public should be forbidden because of the following reasons. (我认 为公共场合应该禁烟。) ? The reasons are as follows ? The reasons are listed in the following part.

第二段: Firstly//first//first of all, smoking can lead to a lot of diseases, such as heart attack, lung cancer, breathing problem. It is estimated that about 2.5 million people die from smoking each year. Secondly//in addition// futhermore//moreove, secondhanded smoking is very harmful to passive smokers, especially to women and children. Lastly// What makes things worse, smoking also pollutes the environment and may cause fire.

第三段: All in all, smoking is harmful to both smokers and passive smokers. For the above reasons, , it is high time that we took firm measures to forbid smoking in public. Only in this way, can we live a healthier life in future.

Smoking can give you energy and help you to concentrate on your work.

Smoking can helps to control weight.

Smoking seems very cool and handsome.

Smoking enables them to make more friends.

例文2: 对比观点型
? (1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的 看法。 ? 1. 有一些人认为。。。 ? 2. 另一些人认为。。。 ? 3. 我的看法。。。

? 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为 (说)……,在他们看来,…… ? People’s opinions about __①____ change from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them②-----------------(支持A的理由 一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). ? While others think that ____ for the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支 持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥-----------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由 三). ? From my point of view, I think ⑧---------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨-------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . ?

? People’s opinions about smoking change from perso

n to person. Some people say that smoking in public should be forbiden.To them smoking can lead to a lot of diseases, such as heart attack, lung cancer, breathing problem. What is more, second-handed smoking is very harmful to passive smokers .Moreover, smoking also pollutes the environment and may cause fire .

However,//in contrary, others think that smoking should not be forbidden for the following two reasons. Firstly Smoking can give you energy and help you to concentrate on your work. In addition, smoking seems very cool and handsome.
? From my point of view, I think ⑧ smoking in public places should be forbidden. (我的 观点). The reason is that ⑨ smoking is harmful to both smokers and passive smokers(原因). ? (150 words)

(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
? Some people believe//think that ①---------------(观点一). For example, they think ②----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③----------------(为他们带来的好处). ? In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意 该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤----------------(反对的理由之二). ? Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)

?

Some people believe//think that ①smoking in public should not be forbidden (观点一). For example, they think ② smoking can give them energy and help them to concentrate on their work (举例说明).And it will bring them ③more chances of making friends.(为他们带来的好处). ? In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④smoking may lead to a lot diseases.(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤smoking is very harmful to passive smokers.(反对的理由之二). ? From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥ smoking should be forbidden.(我对文章所 讨论主题的看法) Only in this way, can we live a healthy life in future. (108 words)

Smoking in public places should be forbidden
Positive Argument We should not smoke in public. Effect, bad, cough, lung cancer, save, waste, money,heart attack, harmful, pollute, teeth, lead to, fire, forbid Negative We should smoke in public places

Key words

Give, energy, help, useful, worry, concentrate, control, weight, cool, handsome, make friends, get rid of

sentences.

The effects of smoking Give you more energy and help are mostly reversible— you to concentrate. after stopping, coughs, Help to control your weight,… breathing problems, the risk of heart attacks and of lung cancer all start to fall immediately. Breathing other

Positive Argument: We should not smoke in public.
Key words: Effect, bad, cough, lung cancer, save, waste, money,heart attack, harmful, pollute, teeth, lead to, fire, forbid sentences. The effects of smoking are mostly reversible—after stopping, coughs, breathing problems, the risk of heart

attacks and of lung cancer all start to fall immediately. Breathing other people’s smoke (passive smoking) is also harmful: most workplaces have….

? Should smoking be forbidden in public? ? 1. 有些人认为公共场合不应该禁烟,因为 吸烟可以给他们带来更多精力,帮助他们 集中注意力于工作,还能帮助他们交到更 多朋友。 ? 2. 你的观点是什么?为什么? ? 3. 总结

Negative We should smoke in public places Give, energy, help, useful, worry, concentrate, control, weight, cool, handsome, make friends, get rid of

Give you more energy and help you to concentrate. Help to control your weight,…

If we smoke, life will become more and more short . In order to stay more in the world, please care for our bodies.

Second-hand smoke
Second-hand smoke harm to passive
smokers than active smokers (主动吸烟者) do not light, especially for particularly serious crimes against children. Survey, in China, The main victims of passive smoking are women and children, Although they do not smoke themselves, but often in the family, public places, suffered second-hand smoke of others.

If baby swallow one ,it likely to died.

On the whole ,smoking is very
harmful and it does no good! You quit smoking!


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