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What Attitude Should We Take to Sth. 1. 社会上对某事物的错误观念 2. 分析批驳其错误所在 3. 给出如何看待该事物的建议 (批驳分析类)
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写作模式(批驳分析类) 1) With the arrival / birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit / Affected with this trend, some / many people come to believe / contend that ...(错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint / belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场) 4) It is true that sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(让步法分析) 5) On any scale of …, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it is
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nothing but… (批驳分析I) 7) ... (进一步阐述) 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one to …, as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II) 9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth. 10) On the one hand, … (正确看法I) 11) On the other, ... (正确看法II) 12) In sum, sth. means …but not … to our life. (结论句)

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What Attitude Should We Take to Money

1. 社会上对金钱的错误观念。

2. 分析批驳其错误所在。
3. 给出如何正确看待金钱的建议。

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Reference model: What Attitude Should We Take to Money

1) With the arrival of market-based economy, money is becoming more and more important in our life. 2) Hit with this trend, many people come to believe that money is above everything else in their life. 3) But their belief could not arouse any echo in my mind. 4) It is true that money is a key ingredient in one’s struggle towards happiness, without 上一页 下一页

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which, for example, there would be no way to go to college or form a family. 5) On any scale of one’s daily worry, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than money. 6) If we see it in its true colors, however, money is nothing but a means to an end. 7) Money can buy us food, but not appetite; medicine, but not health; diplomas, but not knowledge; and days of joy, but not the whole life of happiness. 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on money may lead one to stop at nothing in making it, as
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can be easily seen in the cases of most corrupt officials. 9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards money. 10) On the one hand, money is vital to our daily life, in which case, it is wise of you to spend not where you may save. 11) On the other, money is something to be plowed into something more important, so it is better to spare not where you must spend. 12) In sum, money means something but not everything to our life.
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Effects of Sth. On Sb. /

Sth. Else 1. 分析某事物的正面效应 2. 分析某事物的负面效应 3. 给出怎样对待该事物的建议 (分析建议类)
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写作模式(分析建议类) 1) As is known to all, sth. does bring a lot of benefits to sb. / sth. else. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen …, thereby changing …for the better.(正面分析I) 3) Besides, it can make /render sb. / sth. else better able to… (正面分析 II) 4) And best of all, it can help sb.…(正面分析 III) 5)But all the above does not mean / follow that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects sth. brings about. 6) If…, as a succession
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of scientific studies reveals / implies / suggests, there are more chances that… (负面分析I) 7) In addition, the more ..., the worse... (负面分析 II) 8) And worst of all, … (负面分析III) 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of sth. 10) On the one hand, …(建议I) 11) On the other, ... (建议II) 12) In sum, sth. can do sb. / sth. else good or harm, all depending on … (结论句)

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The Effects of Exercise on Our Health

1. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。
2. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。 3. 给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。

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1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.
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5) But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. 6) If you are normally inactive and then, contrary to your usual habit, start a program of undue exercise, as a succession of scientific studies reveals, there are more chances that you have yourself injured. 7) In addition, the more exercise those on a fat-reducing diet take, the more loss of iron they will suffer and the worse their health will get. 8) And
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worst of all, continual as well as excessive exercise can result in sudden death. 9) Therefore, a scientific approach must be adopted to the problem of exercise. 10) On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on both progressiveness and regularity. 11) On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 12) In sum, exercise can do us good or harm, all depending on how we make use of it.
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(分析建议类) A Letter to the College President
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校的某些变化给校长写封信 2. 分析变化主要表现在哪些方面 3. 提出(进一步)改进的意见

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1) I am delighted (distressed) to find there have been favorable(unfavorable) changes in … (议论的主题) since I came here. 2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate that what you have done is in (out of) line with ...(作者的态 度) 3) In the long run, they will produce more positive (negative) effect on ... 4) Such desirable (undesirable) changes can be found in the aspects as follows. 5) First, …
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(分析I)6)Second, ... (分析II) 7) And best(worst) of all, …(分析III) 8) ... (进一步阐 述) 9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in …(that there is little you can do about …)10) Instead, to enrich (reverse)…, a richer variety (a better health) can be added to …(建议I) 11) And meanwhile, ... (建议II) 12) It should be born in mind that … (结论句)

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A Letter to the College President
1. 就校园生活的可喜变化给校长写封信。

2. 分析该变化表现在哪些方面。
3. 提出进一步改进的建议。

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1) I am delighted to find there have been favorable changes in our campus life since I came here. 2) From my angle of view, these changes indicate what you have done is in line with the interests of undergraduates. 3) In the long run, they will produce more positive effect on our growth. 4) Such desirable changes can be found in the aspects as follows. 5) First, our dining
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conditions have turned for the better, thus ending our everyday worry about where to satisfy our hunger. 6) Second, your faculties have paid as much attention to our emotional world as to our intellectual growth, which in turn lends much warmth of family to our life. 7) And best of all, we find the campus a more pleasant place to live on. 8) As a result of your efforts, we now have more places to go to for recreation, such as cafes, net bars, fitness centers and reading rooms.
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9) But all the foregoing does not mean that there is little room for further improvement in our college life. 10) Instead, to enrich our life here to the fullest, a richer variety should be added to our spare time as well as our curriculums. 11) And meanwhile, we should be allowed more access to scientific research, social practice and the frontier of our own fields. 12) It should be born in mind that the purpose of our college life is to prepare us for the different needs of tomorrow’s society.
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How to Do Something 1. 某一事物的现状 2. 分析该事

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1) Much to our distress / delight / surprise, these years have seen the popularity / worsening / much improvement / a widespread neglect of sth. (议论的主题) in society. 2) According to a recent / official report / survey / opinion poll, ...(佐证陈述) 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, things are bound to turn for the better / worse. (Para. 1)
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4) The importance / harmfulness / significance of sth. to sb. / sth. else, (however), can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, …(分析I)6) In the second, ... (分 析II) 7) And above all, …(分析III) 8) To sum up, ... (归纳总结) (Para. 2)
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9) So the most pressing for us / basic problem now is how to… 10) In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon …(建议I) 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to ... (建议II) 12) In one word, where there is …, there is …(结论句) (Para. 3)
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How to Conduct Patriotic Education Among the Youth of Today 1. 我国爱国主义教育的现状。 2. 分析爱国主义教育的重要意义。

3. 如何在青少年中开展爱国主义教育?

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1) Much to our distress, these years have seen a widespread neglect of patriotic education in our society. 2) According to some official reports, many patriotic education centers have been closed down or kept open to the public for other more profitable purposes while many of our national heroes have given way to today’s pop stars in youths’ minds. 3) If this current is allowed to run its course, I am afraid, things are bound to turn for the worse, with less and less sense of patriotism left in the youth.
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4) The significance of patriotic education to our society, however, can be seen from the perspectives as follows. 5) In the first place, the patriotic education can make youth more aware of the glorious history and culture of our nation, thus building up their sense of pride as Chinese. 6) In the second, the patriotic education helps youth value today’s hard-earned life so as to hold
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dearer their golden chances of enriching themselves with knowledge in peace. 7) And above all, the patriotic education can push youth to draw upon more of their capabilities in order to make tomorrow’s life better than today’s and leave behind themselves more highlights for the nation’s culture. 8) To sum up, patriotic education is a key ingredient in the all-round development of youth.

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9) So the most pressing for

us now is how to Back effectively inculcate patriotism in the youth of today. 10) In my opinion, the first step should be focused upon giving fuller play to the potentials of patriotic education centers instead of running them for the purpose of making money. 11) Then, greater efforts must be made to integrate the patriotic education into the curriculums throughout youth’s education. 12) In one word, where there is an effective patriotic education of youth, there is a greater enhancement of national cohesiveness.
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My Way of Seeing Something
1. 人们从不同的角度看待某一事物 2. 我的看法是··(说明理由) ·· ·· (理由陈述类)

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写作模式(理由陈述类) 1) Something may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as …while others may view it as …(人们 的看法举例) 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as … (我的看法) (Para. I)

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4) My insight into sth.(My outlook on sth. / My understanding of sth.) is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, sth. is so …that …(理由I) 6) …(进一步 阐述) 7) Secondly, sth. is also … (理由II) 8) ... (进一步阐述) 9) And most of all, …(理由III) 10) …(进一步阐述) (Para. II) (划线部分可替换)
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11) I have (not) much freedom / option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing sth. more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of … in order to pave the way for ... (Para. III)

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My Way of Seeing Life

1. 人们从不同的角度看待人生 2. 我所推崇的看法是··(说明理由) ·· ··

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My Way of Seeing Life 1) Life may be many things to many people. 2) Some may see it as building up as much material wealth as possible while others may view it as enjoying to the fullest the pleasures each day offers. 3) As far as I am concerned, however, I would prefer to value it as my sole chance to enrich myself with knowledge first, then to serve the society with all my heart, and finally to leave the world without any regrets.
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4) My outlook on life is bound up with three major factors. 5) Primarily, life is so wondrous that I am eager to explore it. 6) Set your heart on a mystery and you can find something new; attach more of your mind to a challenge and you can get a sense of success, all of which, however, depends on how much knowledge you have equipped yourself with first. 7) Secondly, life is also short to any
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individual like me. 8) The flower you have just kissed for the first time is now fading away while the love from others you have com

e to cherish more is already on the wane. 9) And most of all, both wondrousness and shortness of life push me to seize every golden minute and every golden chance. 10) Once I idle away the time I am supposed to grasp to study or work for the people, there will be no more hope of making up for it.
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11) I have much option in this matter, but I have never found any other way of seeing life more reasonable and acceptable than mine. 12) Thus, I will leave no stone unturned during the course of my college studies in order to pave the way for my meaningful and colorful life.

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The Changes in Something
1. 简述某一事物的变化情况 2. 说明引起变化的原因 3. 分析其影响或走向 (原因分析类)

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Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide
140 120 100 80 60 40 20 0 1960s 1970s 1980s 1990s
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写作模式(原因分析类) 1) As can be seen from the graph / table / diagram, there have been drastic / considerable / unfavorable changes in …(议论的主题)over the past period from __ to __. 2) To be concrete, …only… in __(year) while / whereas the ratio(s) went up to…in __ (year).(变化概述) 3) These changes are most disturbing, so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first. (Para. 1)

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4) Some changes, such as …, result from …, but many others have much to do with … 5) In the first place, man’s excessive exploitation of … has done a lasting damage to …, only to … (原因分析I)6) … (进一步说明) 7) In the second, in order to …, man has had to overwork …, which in turn has accelerated … (原因分析II) 8) In the third, man’s blind application of … has caused permanent changes in …(原因分析III) 9) Among these changes are ... (进一步说明)(Para. 2) (划线部分可替换) 上一页 下一页

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10) The list of causes could go on, but they are already enough to indicate that these changes are producing more and more negative effects on the world. 11) These changes not only …, but also…(分析) 12) If allowed to run its course, I firmly believe / I am afraid, this trend will certainly bring more harm / threats to our society / life.(结论 句) (Para. 3)

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The Changes in Great Natural Disasters Worldwide 1. 简述所给图表中的变化。
2. 说明引起变化的主要原因。

3. 分析这些变化对全球的影响。

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1) As can be seen from the graph, there have been rapid changes in the great natural disasters worldwide over the past period from 1960s to 1990s. 2) To be concrete, there were only 16 terrible natural disaster

s, causing 300,000 deaths in 1960s while the ratios went up respectively to 131 and 1,100,000 in 1990s. 3) The changes are disturbing, so it is necessary for us to go into the whys and wherefores of them first.
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4) Some changes, such as those in earthquakes and volcanic eruptions, result from the movement of plates along the weaknesses in the earth’s crust, but many others have much to do with man’s activities. 5) In the first place, man’s mindless and excessive exploitation of natural resources has done a lasting damage to the ecosystem, only to invite more floods, landslides and mud-rock flows. 6) The rare flood to which China was subjected in 1998 is typical of the evil seeds man had sowed for himself. 7) In the second, in order to feed their more and 上一页 下一页 larger

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families, people from all over the world have had to overwork their farming land as well as their grassland, which in turn has accelerated the desertification of the land on which they have been relying for existence. 8) In the third, man’s blind application of scientific findings has caused unfavorable and permanent changes in the global living environment. 9) Among these changes are the depletion of ozone layer, the worsening of greenhouse effect, the recurrence of hurricanes and the extinction of more species.
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10) The list of causes could go on, but they are already enough to indicate that these changes are producing more and more negative effects on the world. 11) They have not only made it impossible for the natural systems to recover their balance but also made it harder for man to ensure his better survival. 12) If allowed to run its course, I am afraid, this trend will certainly bring more serious threats to all the living things on the Earth, mankind included.
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What Causes Something New
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Para.1: 1) Believe it or not/Like it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in…/a popularity (resurgence/worsening/crisis/ decline/growth/revival/spread ) of…in our society/on the Chinese campus. 2) According to…, people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in … 3) To get a better sense of it, it is necessary for us to find out its causes.
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Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis/study/ observation of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern/should call for more of our concern. 5) In the first place, it is the product of…, for which…(原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among…, as an ideal way of…, since… (原因 II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of…(原因III) 8) While…, in fact,…
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Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our social/college life are positive/ negative/a mixed one. 10) On the one hand,...(分析I) 11) On the other,...(分析II) 12) With more and more…added / attached to the trend, I am fully convinced / I am deeply worried, it will certainly … / is bound to…in the time to come.

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What Causes a Boom in Celebrating Foreign Festivals
1. 近几年大学校园出现了 一股过洋节热。 2. 阐明导致该现象的原因。

3. 分析该现象的社会影响。

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Para. 1: 1) Believe it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus. 2) According to an official report/survey, young people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in such festivals as Valentine’s Day, April Fools’ Day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day. 3) To get a better sense of the boom, it is necessary for us to find out its causes.
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Para. 2: 4) A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern. 5) In the first place, it is the product of students’ seeking after individuality and novelty, for which the college campus offers an ideal climate. (原因I) 6) In the second, it is seen, among the students, as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress for the time being, since most college students, single child of each family, are
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subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth. (原因II) 7) And above all, it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Eastern cultures. (原因III) 8) While the Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals, in fact, the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays.
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Para. 3: 9) The effects of this change on our college life are positive. 10) On the one hand, it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures. (分析I) 11) On the other, it has enriched the college life, thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on. (分析II) 12) With more and more health and color added to the trend, I firmly believe, it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come.
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Views on Something 1. 有人认为该事物·· ·· ·· 理由是·· ·· ·· 2. 也有人认为该事物·· ·· ·· 3. 我的看法 (各抒己见类) 写作模式

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写作模式(各抒己见类) 1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth / appearance / arrival / development of sth.… 2) But this agr

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3) Many / Some people contend / believe / argue that… (一方观点) 4) They base their contention / belief / argument on the grounds that… (理由I) 5)Besides, as they often point out, ... (理由II) 6)Yet others react to the issue / matter the other way around and hold / assert that the opposite is just reasonable / more acceptable. (另一方观点) 7) From their angle of view, … (理由I) 8) And even worse, as they claim, … (理由II) (Para. II)
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9) I am of / adhere to / stick to the opinion / view / truth that anything new, including…, can bring human society fortunes / merits / advantages or misfortunes / demerits / disadvantages, all depending on ... (我的看法) 10) On the one hand, … (理由I) 11) But on the other, ... (理由II) 12) In short, the key / solution to the problem is always controlled in … (结论句) (划线部分可替换)
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Views on Cloning
1. 有人认为克隆技术的应用利大于弊,

理由是·· ·· ··
2. 也有人认为弊大于利,·· ·· ··

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1) Almost everyone would agree that the birth of Dolly, as the first clone of an adult animal, has opened a new way of seeing the creation of life for the world. 2) But this agreement ceases to exist just when it comes to whether cloning will bring fortunes or misfortunes to human society.
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3) Many contend that the merits of cloning will outrun its demerits. 4) They base their contention on the grounds that cloning is the most effective method of saving the rare wild lives from dying out. 5) Besides, as they also point out, cloning can help provide better ways to treat some serious or deadly sicknesses, such as diabetes, and Parkinson’s disease. 6) Yet others react to the issue the other way around and hold that the opposite
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is just reasonable. 7) From their angle of view, cloning will threaten the ecological balance by destroying the natural reproduction through the enjoyment of sexual love between the male and the female. 8) And even worse, as they reveal, cloning will bring greater disasters to human society if it is used in creation of individuals with extreme genetic qualities, like terrorists, desperate scoundrels, and war manias.
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9) I stick to the opinion that anything new, including cloning, can bring human society fortunes or misfortunes, all depending on how it is exploited. 10) On the one hand, it will be an inestimable blessing to the human world if it is applied to reproduction of best dairy cows or other choice domestic poultries. 11) But on the other hand, it

will form a big threat to human society once it is abused in copying those hostile toward humanity. 12) In short, the solution to the problem is always within man’s reach.
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My Choice Between Sth. and Sth. Else

1. 在两个事物之间作出你的选择
2. 对比说明你的选择理由 (对比分析类)

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写作模式(对比分析类) Para.1: 1) With a gradual/sharp growth (decline/worsening/progress/arrival) of/in sth., people become more and more concerned about how to… 2) To make it, some prefer to…while others choose to… 3) If I were asked to make a choice between the two, however, I would like to attach more weight to the latter/former than to the former/latter.
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Para. 2: 4) It is true that ____ does ensure/ bring a lot of …for one, such as…, but, compared with ____, it seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin with, …, thereby …(理由I) 6) By contrast, …, thus … 7) Besides, …, in which context … (理由II) 8) In contrast to that, …, in which case … 9) And the most striking difference between both lies in … (理 由III) 10) … while/whereas …(对比说明)

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Para. 3: 11) From the comparisons and contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my insight into …/ my way of … is more reasonable and acceptable. 12) Therefore, I will …from today on so as to …

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How to Prevent a Terrible Marriage
1. 为了避免婚姻的潜在危机,一些人选 择婚前协议的方式而另一些人仍通过 相互信任的传统方式。 2. 就这两种方式,你的选择倾向是·· ·· ·· (通过对比说明你的选择理由)
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How to Prevent a Terrible Marriage 1) With a sharp growth in the divorce rate, people become more and more concerned about how to avoid the potential risks of their marriages. 2) To make it, some prefer to make premarital agreements before their wedding ceremonies while others still choose to maintain their marriages through their mutual trust. 3) If I were asked to make a choice between the two, however, I would like to attach more weight to the latter than to the former.
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4) It is true that the marriage with a prenup (premarital agreement) does ensure a lot of benefits for the family, such as the protection of children from going hungry or the reasonable distribution of financial assets, once divorce is inevitable, but, compared with the marriage based on the mutual trust, it seems less attractive to me. 5) To begin with, the marriage bound up with a prenup throws itself, from the very outset, into an ocean of family worries, thereby leaving little room for the spouses’
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enjoyment of happiness their unity brings about. 6) By contrast, the marriage built on the mutual trust always nurtures itself in truth, romance and harmony, thus placing no limit on the spouses’ enjoyment of happiness derived from their intimate exchanges. 7) Besides, the prenupbased marriage lays bare, in writing or in cold fact, the spouses’ desire or even greed for money, in which context there is no soil in their marriage for warmth to grow on. 8) In contrast to that, the trust-based marriage always
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reminds the spouses of the truth that there is something more valuable than money in their marriage, in which case both the husband and the wife would tend to bring forth more love and attraction for each other. 9) And the most striking difference between both lies in their emphases on the post-marriage life. 10) The former couple will focus their life on the material or physical interests whereas the latter couple will center their life around the spiritual or ethical refinements.
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11) From the comparisons and contrasts above, anyone can conclude that my way of coping with the prospective problems of a marriage is more reasonable and acceptable. 12) Therefore, I will refine my taste for marriage from today on so as to search the seas of people for the one who is resolved to share with me the affection and thought, comfort and hardship, joy and grief for life.

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