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初中英语作文入门篇

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Mango English作文入门篇
第一章 记叙文

要点概述
记叙文是以记叙和描写为主要手法,通过写入、叙事来表达某 种思想或感情的一种文体。它的主要特点是陈述的内容具有 “过程性”。所谓“过程”,即表现出一定的顺序性、时间性 和持续性。人的身世,事情的发展,环境的变化总有来龙去脉、 前因后果,可以运用叙述的方式来反映某个过程。记叙文里有 六个要素,即when(时间),where(地点),who(人物), what(事件),why(原因)和how(结果)。应注意的是, 在一篇记叙文里,写人、写景、写事、抒情往往是交织在一起 的,不能截然分开,但又各有侧重。

第一节 人物描摹
人是一切社会关系的总和,因此写人所处的社会环境,人与人 之间的关系,这样的人才会给读者以真实感。在写人的书面表 达中,必须要用人物的言行来表现他们的思想,用人物的神态 来表现他们的情感,采用生动而具体的描写。在写人的记叙文 中,应该注意以下几点: 1.在写作时,应该有一个侧重点,如侧重外貌描写、性格描写、 人物事迹描写等。 2.选材要有代表性,要选择能突出人物个性特点的材料,对次要 情节要一笔带过。另外还要注意选材的客观真实性,不要言过 其实。 3.语言要精炼、简短、生动感人,不要拖泥带水、平铺直叙。

第一节 人物描摹
4. 要交代清楚人物、事件、时间、地点、原因和结果这些因素, 尤其是人物、事件这两个要素不可缺少。 5. 人称和事态的正确使用。介绍人物的经理常用一般过去时态, 若是写当前情况,则一般现在时态。人称通常用第三人称。

真题回放
在你的成长过程当中,家人倾注了大量的心血,他们对你的生 活和学习给予了关心、帮助外,也会提出一些建议。但作为子 女的你总会在某些问题上和父母存在分歧。看看下面的提示词, 搜寻你记忆的长河,有没有值得你回忆的事情呢》拿起笔来写 一写吧! 要求:句式工整,书写规范,语句条理性强,词数控制在80字 左右。 提示词语:watch TV ,be strict with , as usual

写作点拨
1. 根据中英文提示 , 可以确定 ,这篇作文应用第一人称的手 法来写。 2. 这篇作文的主题是主要表现在你的成长过程当中,家人倾注 了大量的心血,但同时父母和子女之间会在某些问题上产生 分歧。可见,尽管是写人,但要通过叙事来烘托。那么在这 篇习作当中,外貌描写可以少写或略写,突出人物的性格。 其中心人物可以是:my mother , my father , my parents . 3. 根据题目的要求,这篇作文属于发生了的事情,叙述时应用 一般过去时态。当然,在描写父母性格以及平时对我的关爱 和帮

助时应用一般现在时态。

满分作文 My mother
My mother , is a kind and nice woman , but she is 1> 开门见山地叙 2>so that 句型表现了 very strict with me . 述了妈妈的性格
特征----kind ,nice 3>以问句的形式 , and One Sunday night , when I was watching the film be strict 来叙述当时的心 with me. Harry Potter very happily , mother asked me to go to bed . I loved the film so much that I didn’t move. But for 理,进一步表现 a while , I noticed that she didn’t say anything , then she 了与妈妈产生分 got angry and turned off the TV . I was so sad that I 歧 我当时的委屈

went into my room and cried .I thought , “I have only two nights to enjoy TV, why does not mother allow me to watch TV ? ” The next day when she was cooking ,she talked with me as usual . I pretended not to hear , but she didn’t mind and told me she wanted me to have a 4>说明了妈妈不 good rest . Then I understood her . 让“我”看电视 的原因 I love my mother .

Homework My Father
相关词汇: 1> severe adj. 严厉的;苛刻的 2> colleague n. 同事;同僚;同人 3> be strict with sb 对某人严格要求 4> be afraid of sb / sth 害怕某人、某物

优秀范文
My father is very tall . He has two small but bright eyes . His mouth is wide and big . My father is a very severe man , he’s very strict with me . Every night he asks me what I have learned in the day , and helps me with my home work. Every morning , at six o’clock , he asks me to get up to read some English texts loudly . Sometimes he’s serious , but I know he loves me very much . He often goes to bookstore and buys a lot of books for me . If I want something , he always says , “If you study well , I will buy it for you .”Sometimes I am afraid of him , but I love him very much. My father is a hard-working driver . He gets up early every day , and he is never late for work . His colleagues also like him very much . I think my father is a very good man.

范文点评
文章分段描述了爸爸各方面情况,重点突出了爸爸对“我”学 习方面的关爱和帮助。“Sometimes he is serious , but I know he loves me very much.”不仅展现了爸爸的性格,同时表达了父子 之间的深情。作者谈到了爸爸的工作情况,突出了 “hardworking”这一词。

范文2:The person who I love best
If someone asks me , “Who do you love best?” I’ll answer without thinking ,“My mother!”My mother is a village woman . She has very little school education , but she knows that knowledge is very important to young people . She often teaches me how to get along with my studies and encourage me to study hard. My mother takes good care of me .She does not let me do any housework , so that I can spend more time on study . Once I heard she was seriously ill , I rushed home to see her .When I got home at night , I found the light was still on and mother was sitting in bed ,making new clothes

for me for me .I was so deeply moved that tears came to my eyes . This is my mother ,a kind and hard working woman , I’ll respect and love her forever.

开头以提问的形式, 并做回答,吸引读 者

写作助手
一、精彩的开头和结尾 1.My mother is a kind woman ,but she is strict with me . 2.He looks very young / old /happy… 3. I’ll respect her and love her foever .

二、重点词汇和短语 Round face(圆脸) ; a small mouth; warm-hearted ; hard-working; be friendly to sb

写作助手
三、常见句型 1. She has a round face , a small mouth and two big round eyes. 2. He is 1.72 meters tall 3. My friend is good at playing soccer. 4. Our English teacher is forty years old now , but she looks young . 5. There is so much to tell about my father . 6. In a short , he is a good teacher . 7. We get on well with each other . 8. My brother is two years older then me .

写作助手
三、常见句型 9.Now I have grown up and become more independent. 10. I feel lucky to have such a good teacher . 11.Sometimes , she’s like a friend more than a teacher . 12.He used to be a worker . 13.She is neither too tall nor too short . 14.I’m proud of my father .

写作助手
三、常见句型 9.Now I have grown up and become more independent. 10. I feel lucky to have such a good teacher . 11.Sometimes , she’s like a friend more than a teacher . 12.He used to be a worker . 13.She is neither too tall nor too short . 14.I’m proud of my father .

满分操练
1、请根据一下要点提示 ,以“My English Teacher”为题写一篇 80词左右的短文。 要求:1.简单介绍一下他的基本情况 , 如年龄、外貌等;2.她 热爱学生,热爱教育献身于英语教育事业;3.上课生动、活泼、 有趣,深受学生欢迎。 2、每个人都拥有自己心中的偶像,相信你的心中一定有一颗 “星”在闪烁。请根据以下要点,以“My Favorite Star”为题 介绍一位你所喜欢的明星。 要点:1…是我最喜欢的明星 2.解释我喜欢他的原因 3.他的一些 个人情况。

第二节 故事见闻
入门方法: 故事见闻以叙述家庭、学校、社会事件为主,属叙事类记叙文。我们 在写此类记叙文时,应该注意以下几点: 1.人称。记叙文可用第一人称或者第三人称来写,但使用这两种 人称各有利弊。用第一人称,文章比较生动、形象,给读者身临其境 的感觉,但其叙述的范围受到一定的限制,无法同时叙述发生在不同 地点的时事件。用第三人称则没有这种局限性,但很难把握不同地点 的不同人物发生的不同事件。当然,如果写作要求中已明确指出用第 几人称,那我们就要根据要求而定。 2.时态。英语中动作发生的时间决定其运用的时态。继续过去发 生的事,就得用一般将来时态。如果是叙述即将要发生的事或计划决 定要做的事,就得用一般将来时

态。在同一篇文章里面,根据事情的 进展,我们就可能会用到多种时态。

第二章 故事见闻
3.背景。一般情况下,时间、地点、人物应放在记叙文的开头, 这样就可以给读者提供上下文的内容和背景,帮助读者理解含 义。 4.组织。在叙事时,我们应对整个事件合理安排,按一定得多 顺序来叙述。叙事要有开头、发展和结尾。 5.意图。叙述一件事情,必定有一定的意图。作者必须保证其文 章给读者的印象和产生的效果与其写作意图相符。 6.结尾。写好文章的结尾,给读者留下比较深刻的印象。

满分导航 真题回放
由于父亲常年在外工作,李华一边上学一边照顾多病的母亲。 昨天李华不慎扭伤了脚,医生建议他在家休息两周。请你根据 以下提示写一篇短文,谈谈如何帮助李华。 提示:1.Why will you help Li Hua ? 2.How can you help him with his lessons ? 3.What are you going to do to help him with the housework? Li hua’s father works in another city , so Li Hua has to take care of his sick mother after school_____

写作点拨
1.根据提示,可以确定,该习作应该用第一人称来写。 2.根据提供的信息,其内容应该涉及到现在、过去以及将来,所 以在习作中,要正确运用不同的时态。如,李华的父亲常年在 外工作,李华一边上学一边照顾多病的母亲,这些情况的叙述 应用一般现在时;昨天李华不慎扭伤了脚,医生建议他在家休 息两周,这件事发生在过去,则要用一般过去时;提示中有关 帮助的三个问题,其动作发生在将来,应用一般将来时。 3.确定人称和时态之后,我们好要注意语言组织,展开合理的想 象,并围绕帮助补习功课和做家务两方面来叙述。文章最后, 可以表明帮组李华的原因以及对他的祝愿。

满分作文 连词so连接的并列 I can help Li Hua 句,简洁地交代了
李华的家庭情况 宾语从句的时态 Li Hua’s father works in another city , so Li Hua has运用正确 to take

care of his sick mother after school. He hurt his foot yesterday . The doctor said he had to stay at home for two weeks . I will help 后面接名词或者 him ! I will go to his home to tell him the homework and what we 动词 learn in class ,explain the difficult points and answer his questions. I can also do some housework for him , such as cleaning the house ,washing some clothes and cooking. I hope he will get well soon . I am sure Li Hua won’t fall behind !

满分范文
满分理由 全文脉络清晰,叙述理由十分有条理,且语句通顺,无语法错 误以及拼写错误。时态上根据事情发生的时间,综合运用了一 般现在时,一般过去时以及一般将来时。文中多次运用了宾语 从句,如:“The doctor said he had to stay at home for two weeks.”“I am sure Li Hua won

’t fall behind”显示了作者较好 的写作功底。

写作练习Practice
What am I going to do during the Summer holidays ? 关于暑假我都做了什么,要求写出计划与安排,层次需要分明, 叙述需要有条理,且遣词造句自然顺当,语言朴实生动。

范文:What am I going to do during the summer holidays
The new summer holidays are coming. As everybody knows , summer is a beautiful season. The sky is blue and the sun is shining .The flowers are blossoming and the birds are singing. The trees are green and the rice is golden . I like it very much . During the coming summer holidays ,I am going to go on with my study . In the morning , I’ll study English .I have many English books . I like to read them . Then I’ll do my homework.Iam going to borrow some science books from the library ,too. Besides, I’m going to discuss problems with my classmates . I’ll do something good for my family and others. I’ll cook , do some washing , clean the room , and so on . I’ll also learn from

范文:What am I going to do during the summer holidays
Uncle Lei Feng and try to help the old and young. There is a very small garden in front of my house. There are many kinds of flowers in it , I’ll water them every day . I’m going to have some sports in the afternoon , I’ll play basketball , volleyball and badminton with my neighbours. What’s more , I am going to learn to swim with the help of my fatehr . If my parents have time , I’ll go out sightseeing with them . There is a large , beautiful park in the center of the city ,there we can go boating and take photos. My summer holidays will be happy holidays . I’ll have a good time !

写作助手
一、精彩的开头和结尾 1. I’ll never forget the day which we spent in park together . 2. I had a happy day yester day . 3. The traffic accident happened outside the school gate. 4. I felt very happy last Sunday . 5. Tough we were tired , we felt happy , for we did a good deed.

写作助手
常见句型: 1. He ran to school as fast as possible. 2. I saw an old man falling off the chair . 3. He was too tired to walk any further. 4. Someone knocked at the door when I was doing my homework. 5. I found a wallet lying on the ground . 6. Helping others always brings us joy. 7. I could hardly believe it . 8. Looking at the snowman , they were smiling happily.

“好”的级别之分
关于“好”,用英语你能想到几个词? 1.It is good !别人向你问好时good很常用,例如听说你明年要上大学, 朋友听到后也会说“good”。 2.That is great .太好了 Great 在这里是“很棒”的意思,和excellent 差不多。基本是和 “good ”一个级别。 3.That’s wonderful.太棒了。 Wonderful听起来要比great好些。要是遇到有人跟你问好,你回答:I am wonderful.那就表示比今天是真的很不错了! 4.That is incredible.真是令人难以臵信。 Incredible算是good这一系列形

容词里面最高级的。如果用到 incredible,就表示这个东西真是好到令你印象深刻,好的不得了

写景状物入门
写景、状物作文即描述所见景物,使读者对所描述的景物或物 获得如观其形、闻其声、尝其味、触其体、临其境的感受。写 这类记叙文时,我们应该注意以下几点: 1、明确描述目的。是为了客观性描述景或物,还是为了借景抒 情。 2、抓住景物的典型特征。首先必须确定从哪些方面来描述,才 能抓住其显著特点,不必面面俱到,但要主次分明。 3.顺序恰当,层次分明。无论写景,还是状物,都要按一定的顺 序,如写景往往按由近及远,有总体到局部的顺序,切记杂乱 无章。

写景状物入门
4.手法多样,切记平铺直叙。通过不同的写作手法来描述景或 物,表达一定的感情。 5.精心选材,详略得当。尽可能以较小的篇幅,给读者留下较深 刻的印象。

真题回放
根据下列提示,写一篇80次左右的短文。 下雪了,雪像许多鹅毛在空中飞舞,像许多白花在树上在大地 上开放。大雪过后,大地更加地美丽。孩子们打雪仗、堆雪人; 年轻人出来溜冰;老人出来欣赏雪景。雪给人们带来了欢乐, 我非常喜欢雪。

写景状物入门
写作点拨: 1.这是一片雪景的习作,根据提示,我们自然应该根据自然雪景 以及后人们在雪中玩耍的情景两方面来进行描述。 2.该篇习作,用一般现在时和现在进行时为宜,这样会使描述的 显得更加生动逼真。 3.在描述下雪景时,可用到比喻手法,如用look like 短语:The snow looks like many goose feathers flying in the sky. It looks like a lot of… 4.在描述学后男女老少在雪中玩耍的情景时,应该用现在进行 时,可采用句式:Some are… some …are , others are 5.习作的最后,应该表达“我”对雪的喜爱之情

Snow

感叹句表达了作 者的喜悦之情

Look!It is snowing heavily! What beautiful snow ! It looks like many ,many goose feathers flying in the sky . It looks like a lot 该句描述出雪 后的景象 of white flowers on the trees and ground. After a heavy snow , the ground becomes white ,and more beautiful than before. It is happiest time for children and young men. Look ! Children come out of their houses and begin to play with the snowballs , some are fighting each other with snowballs ,some are making a snowman. What great fun it is ! Some young people come out and go skating , and the old are enjoying this scenery . Snow brings people happiness. I like snow very much.

Sunset
My grandmother lives near the sea .That is a good place to watch the sunset. One day I went to visit my grandmother . About 4 o’clock in the afternoon , I stood near the window .The sun was over a hill then , yellow and bright. Nearly 5 o’clock ,the garden sun changed in t

o dark red , coloring the blue sea red. Some time later , the sun became a big and round pink plate . The clouds 拟人 around the sun also became colorful , like peaches ,tigers ,sometimes(personification) in the , the Great Wall , the hill sunset seemed to be painted red . Slowly the sun came closer to the sea, finally jumped into the sea and disappeared.

写作点评

作者用了大量的形容词来形容美景,并着重描述了太 阳以及周边事物的颜色变化,如太阳颜色变化是 yellow –dark red-pink,文章恰当的运用了比喻的手法, 如:“The clouds around the sun also became colorful , like peaches ,tigers ,sometimes the Great Wall.”

英语中的拟人personification
My rocking chair was making noises all night; it's getting very old. The flower was very pretty, it smiled at me and its perfume had such a nice smell. The Earth keeps on turning and turning, I wonder when it will stop. My computer is protesting about how I'm using it too much. In the winter when I am standing outside, my teeth keep on protesting how it's so cold.

关于雨范文
It took 50 mins to Beginning this summer, even here theby They had stopped next extinguish the fire a spring to once several days of rain, the sun's anger at refresh themselves extinguished, and the weather has become very cool that people are feeling refreshed. When it rains, foam has been of coffee, sitting in his study playing online games, but can not help, but be attracted to the rain outside. Rain on the leaves, issued dull sound; rain hit the road, splashes of white foam; rain hit the racks, the issue sounds sweet tinkle.

关于夏天的雨

Its fur is short, dense and silky.

Lie in the window sill and see rain, dense rain such as pearl curtains, hammer down from the sky, grab a hand, her lack of playfully escape, leaving only a trace of cool in the palm of the hand. After the rain, my friends and barefoot, to play in the water puddles in the area. Walk through the rain, my little feet very comfortable, I splash a small partner, and made each other who are wet, and we really enjoyed ourselves. Rain, you give us a cool, but also brought me happiness.

关于雨的作文2
Spring rain, is the most gentle. If the rain comes, you are trying to make rain wipe his face, the kind of feeling is soft, like her mother gently touching your face, very comfortable. And the grass who have had rain and nourish flowers, it will certainly be more showy. Rain, is their nutrition. Summer rain, is the most passionate. Rain on the roof, the glass on the issue of 'Hua Lala "sound, people can not help but think that summer rain like a mad bees, kept in the tweet. Was the taste of summer rain hit his face could be bad taste, It is like a small stone thrown into the face, and hurt thehand.

关于雨的作文2
Autumn rain, spring rain and summer rain combination. Sometimes, thin autumn rains swept the earth of the drift, and sometimes like a hair-like down casual pan

t. However, the autumn is the messenger of the fruit harvest. Under the autumn, farmers are also easier uncle heart, because the days to harvest. The winter rain, like an old-time woman, very few appearances. If the winter rain, I am afraid that the snow of the bar. It Xuxu fly in the air triumphantly. At this time, the children can be happy yet, and they can have fun one of. Rain has brought the world to us fresh each time that once the rain, the earth like a filter-like freshness.

写作练习
题目: Four seasons of my hometown . Useful words: Province ; swallow; snow flake; ginger ; be busy doing something ; a heavy snowfall

写作助手
一、精彩开头和结尾 1、I like spring best. 2、There’re four seasons in a year ,spring … 3、Look! What a heavy snow! 4、Our school is small but nice ! 5、I love my hometown though it is far from city. 6、In spring ,trees turn green and flowers come out. 7、I miss my pet dog very much 8、I love my school because it is like my home.

写作助手
二、重点词语和短语 hometown;mountain;village;beautiful;fantastic; sunshine ; spring; look like ;a heavy snow ;the hottest season ; Enjoy the scenery. 三、常见句型 1、What a heavy rain / snow . 2、The ground is covered with snow 3、That is a good place to watch sunset. 4、How time flies ! 5、There’s something about four seasons in the picture.

写作助手
6、Summer comes after spring . 7、 Looking up the sky , I saw the moon and many stars . 8、 He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man. 9、Three ’re all kinds of beautiful flowers in the park . 10、The hill is green and the water is clear . 11、Guilin is famous for its beautiful scenery . 12、It is warm here all the year round and the air is fresh. 13、Elephant is the largest animal in existence on the land today . 14、TV helps me open my eyes and mind .

趣味学习
含动物名称的习语 英语中有不少习语含有动物名称 , 它们使语言生辉,文章溢 彩。请看一下词语你能猜出多少呢?

early bird Let the cat out of the bag Lucky dog Cold fish Get one’s goat As strong as a horse Black sheep

早起的人 泄露天机 幸运儿 怪人 惹人生气 非常健壮 害群之马

第二章 看图作文

要点概述 看图作文是以图画或图表来提供时间、地点、人物、 事件等,要求学生借助图画,通过联想将一幅画或几 幅画的直观内容用文字的形式表述出来,并反映图中 的思想内容。从命题来看,一般除图画的提示外,还 有中、英文提示,有的甚至给出了题目或者首句。从 题材上看,可以是绘景状物、写人记事、说明介绍、 发表议论等。在写作时,我么应该通过读图、联想、 分析、推理将图画内容有条理、有层次的表达出来。

第一节 写人记事
入门方法 写人记事是图文作文中的主要类型,通常是几幅画围绕一个总 新展开,讲述一个

小故事或者一件小事,而人与事是密不可分 的。我们在写这类作文时,应该注意以下几点: 1.仔细、认真地看图。在抓住每幅图的关键内容以后,把几 幅图画连起来看,理清思路再动笔。 2.确定时态,并考虑用词、短语及句型。再把握了文章的中 心后,应在内心构思一个基本框架,并使用欠当的词、短语及 句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。图画内容如果是讲述一个故 事或事件,一般用过去时态。

第一节 写人记事
入门方法 3.连词成句,然后再连句成文。运用适当单词或者短语来表达 各图的意思,然后再将各句子串联起来。串联时,要注意使用 适当的连接词语或过渡性语句使上下更为紧凑、自然。 4.反复审核、修改错误。一篇文章写好之后,应进行检查,看 中文是否有拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误,以确 保文章正确无误。

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根据所画内容和所给词汇完成一篇作文 In the Park Last Sunday , we went to the park . There we had a picnic and played happily . After it , we decided to go home . On the way , Li Chen suddenly said something was left and we must go back to the park . When we went back there , we found nothing but she but the rubbish we left just now . Then we understood what Li Chen meant . We should not throw rubbish away . Taking care of the environment is our duty . Though it took us about twenty minutes to pick up all the rubbish , we felt very happy . 满分理由: 叙述与图画完全相符,且将提示语用的恰到好处。作者根据图片提 示展开了合理想象。

英语口语精选
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. Give me a ring ! 来个电话! Drop me a line! 写信给我! Hi! What’s up! Potluck Party: 主人准备场地和道具,参加的人必须带一道菜 或者准备饮料。 Pull over!把车子开到一边 Cut it out =Knock it out! = Stop it !少来这套!同学之间开玩 笑的话。 Don’t give me a hard time !别跟我过不去好不好? Get yourself together !振作点 For here or to go ! 堂食还是外卖!

看图作文
为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率《新世纪英文报》正在举办 “How to Be a Good Learner?”为题的征文比赛,请你踊跃投稿
habit , way Get ready , listen Go over, homework

How to be a good learner

Study in groups , help each other

Work hard , do sports

其他:1~2条

How to be a good learner
As a good learner , we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class . After class , we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time . It’s good to study in groups and help each other .For a student , working hard is important , but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems , we’d better

ask others for help . I hope all these will be helpful to everyone.

New words
Habit 习惯 Helpful 有帮助的 Get ready for sth 为某事做准备 Go over the lessons 复习功课

第三章 想象作文
要点概述 想象作文通常以给定的素材为基础,通过想象来虚构、某个场 景或某个物体。当然,也可能是对未来生活或梦想的描绘。 想象作为绝非不切实际的凭空想象,要以一定的素材作为依据, 在写这类作文时,要注意以下几点。 1.围绕材料充分展开想象,确定写作内容。因为不可能吧想到的 内容都写下来,所以必须选取适当的内容来写。 2.注意确定行文的时态。想象作文时态并不固定,如果是关于未 来的想象,则应该用将来时态;如果是关于过去的想象,或记 叙梦境则应该用过去时态;梦想应该用将来时态。

第一节 入门方法

不同的人会有不同的梦想,有的想当科学家,有的想 当医生,有的想当老师,还有的……我想,这是每个 同学都有话说的一个轻松话题,因为每个人都有自己 的梦想。如果题目没有限定,我们可以畅所欲言。 1.首先要确定梦想是什么。可以叙述自己的梦想,可以 叙述别人的。 2.说明为什么 3.如何实现自己的梦想 灵活运用时态。

真题回放

请以I want to be 为题目写一篇作文 1.What do you want to be ? 2.Why do you want to be 3.How can you make it come true?

I want to be a Doctor
I hope I can be a doctor in the future . I was born in a doctor’s family , my parents are both doctors , They are always busy working for patients’ health and have no time to look after me .They saved many people’s lives during the SARS in 2003.They’ve made contributions to the people and our country , they are called “Angels in White” .They are great in my heart, so I want to be a doctor like my parents . I will study hard to make my dream come true .

I want to be an Inventor
TVs , telephones , fridges , cars , planes , computers , and many other things are important inventions ,they have greatly changed our life .Many people have their ideas and wishes , they want to invent some new things for the world.I’m one of them ,I want to be an inventor in the future .Inventions can make our daily life more convenient , and our life will become better and better .Now I’m a high school student , I’ll try my best to make my dream come true .

写作助手
一、精彩开头和结尾 1.What will our life be in the future ? 我们的未来生活会是什么样? 2.I want to be a doctor when I grow up .我长大后想当一名医生。 3.I had a sweet dream last night. 4.Every body has dreams . 5.I hope my dream will come true. 6.I’ll try my best to realize my dream.

重点词汇和短语

Realize ; come true ; scientist; inventor ; grow up ; in the future ; try one’s best

常见句型
1.What a terrible dream ! 2.I often dream o

f being a teacher in the future . 3.I’ll try my best to make my dream come true 4.We will travel to very place of interest all over our motherland .

有趣的国家名字
有些国家名字也是很有趣的,也很浪漫,其中只要你、我处处 留心,就能在生活中发现许多让人回味的事情。 H.o.l.l.a.n.d Hope our love lasts and never dies. L.i.b.y.a 利比亚 Love is beautiful , you also . F.r.a.n.c.e Friendship remain and never can end . K.o.r.e.a. Keep optimistic regardless of every adverysity. E.g.y.p.t Everything’s great , you pretty thing !

第二节 科幻作文
茫茫宇宙。奥妙无穷,为人类从未停止过对宇宙的探索。到底 有没有UFO , 到底有没有ailen等一系列问题,都让我们充满了 疑问和好奇。“科幻”,这是同学们很感兴趣的话题。写作当 中我们应当注意以下几点: 1.写作要以一定的科幻知识作为依据,切忌与科研成果相违背, 切记不着边际的想象。 2.不能把幻想到的内容全部跃然纸上,这就需要我们围绕材料来 想象,并选取适当的内容来写。

Life in the future
As time goes by , there are going to be great changes in our everyday life .For example , we can only take pills instead of kinds of food , it’s convenient and good for our health. We can travel in space stations by spacecraft. Besides ,we can live in the cities under the sea . Maybe cars are going to drive us to places without a driver . We can tell the car where we want to go , and the car will get us there ! How wonderful the life is !

Besides
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? besides prep. 1.除…之外(还有): He has another car besides this. 除了这辆车外,他还有一辆。 Mary knows Japanese besides French. 除法语外,玛丽还懂日 语。 2.除…之外(不再有)(用于否定句): I care for nothing besides this. 除此之外,我什么也不要。 No one writes to me besides you. 除你之外,没有人给我写信。 He has few friends besides us. 除了我们,他几乎没什么朋友。

Besides
? 【用法】其后除接名词或代词外,还可接动名词或名词性从句: ? Besides being a teacher, he was a poet. 除了是位教师外,他还是位诗 人。 ? Besides doing the cooking I look after the garden. 除了做饭之外我还 得管园子。 ? Have you nothing to tell us besides what we have already heard? 除了 我们已经得知的消息外,你难道没有什么可以告诉我们的吗? ? I know nothing besides what I have told you. 除了我已对你说的之外, 其他的我别无所知。 ? besides ad.此外,而且: ? I don’t want to come out now, and besides, I must work. 我现在不想 出去,而且我还得工作。 ? I have many more besides. 除此之外,我还有更多。 ? The task is very difficult; besides, time presses. 任务艰巨,而且时间紧 迫。

TAXI的由来
众所周知,“TAXI”是出租车的

标志。这个广为人知的词源于一段有 趣的故事。上世纪初,美国纽约青年艾伦偕女友雇一辆马车去“百 老汇”看戏,车夫见艾伦穿戴不俗,举止文雅,便存心宰他一下, 谁料艾伦外柔内刚,岂肯就范,于是两人争斗起来。怎奈艾伦不是 马车夫的对手,竟被打翻在地。艾伦在女友面前当众受辱,十分恼 怒,遂怀恨在心,伺机要砸掉纽约马车夫的“饭碗”。不久,艾伦 买了一辆轿车,命名为“TAXICAR”并把“TAXI”字样写在车身上。他 开着轿车上街载客,抢马车夫的生意。由于当时汽车发明不久,因 而汽车载客生意十分红火,很快出现了一辆又一辆的载客小汽车。 这些出租车几乎都写着“TAXI”字样。艾伦杜撰的这一“TAXI”便成 了一种新型行业——出租汽车载客的标志,并在全世界广泛流传开 来。

TAXI的价格
? 请问 纽约,洛杉矶,旧金山 ? 比如上海,大约走10km的话, 在 12+ 7×2.4 = 28.8 RMB左右 lz在欧洲比如罗马,还有台北,香港都打过车,感觉 比上海有高有低,差距不大 (欧洲大约在上海两倍不 到的样子)

英国伦敦的标志——“黑 色”出租车

Black Cab
? Cab出租汽车,Black Cab在英国伦敦是专有名词,指 “黑面包出租车”。这种出租车外观是黑色,车身圆圆 的像面包。圆头圆脑的黑色出租车是伦敦的经典标志之 一,虽然现在的出租车颜色越来越多彩,但仍基本保持 了传统造型。这种车型是专为出租车设计生产的,这在 全世界也是绝无仅有。 ? 伦敦黑色出租车上有里程表,和国内一样随叫随停。 不过现在越来越多的伦敦黑色出租车外表贴上五颜六色 的广告,并且现在“黑色出租车”只是一种昵称,颜色 已有金色、银色、绿色,几种颜色组合均有了。因此不 要顾名思义认为伦敦黑色出租车(Black Cab)就一定是黑 色的!

? 双层巴士即双层的公共汽车(double-deck bus), 是指载客车 厢由上下两层组成的公共汽车。双层巴士起源于英国,其中行 走伦敦的红色双层公交车,更是英国的“国宝”。双层巴士现 在在我国的很多城市都能能够看到。为了使乘客能够更好地观 光,有些双层巴士的上层甚至是敞开的

日本全国的出租车费大致相同,起步价660日元, 两公里后就按每274米增加80日元。过了晚上11点, 所有的出租车费上浮30%。所以,半夜12点左右 的各线末班地铁和电车,总能挤满浑身酒气的工 薪一族。坐出租车在东京城里移动,花费四五千 日元是经常的事儿,如果你想从城里打车到成田 机场,单程就要3万多日元,比东京到北京的单程 机票还要贵。

第四章 预言童话和神话传说
? 入门方法 ? 寓言,就是用故事的形式巧

妙地表达对人生的认识和感受。 这些故事很简短,含有比喻和象征的意思,蕴含着人来的知 识和智慧,是艺术化了得人生哲理。寓言起源于民间,是劳 动人民生活的经验和寄托。 ? 童话是儿童文学的主要题材。是一种具有浓厚幻想色彩的虚 构故事,多采用夸张、拟人、象征的特殊艺术手段。童话主 要描绘虚拟的事物和境界,出现于其中的“人物”,是并非 真有的假象形象,所讲述的故事,也是不可能发生的,但是 童话中的种种幻想,都植根于现实,是生活的一种折光。童 话创作一般运用夸张和拟人化手法,并遵循一定的事理逻辑 去开展离奇的情节,造成浓烈的幻想氛围以及超越时空制约, 亦虚亦实,似幻犹真的境界。

第四章 预言童话和神话传说
神话是远古人类对所观察或经历的自然界或者社会现象的解释 和说明,只是经过了“幻想”的加工,“神话”了现实的生活。 所以,神话都是想象或幻想的,它只能产生在史前的远古时代, 它是人类还没有能力对自然现象和社会现象做出符合实际的解 释时代的产物。 传说,是劳动人民创作的与历史人物、历史事件和地方古迹、 自然风物、社会习俗有关的故事。其故事形式比较多样,可以 是人物传奇、奇闻异事。它有一定的事实根据,是从民间一点 点流传下来并演变而成的。

真题回放:乌鸦喝水
提示:1、乌鸦喝不到罐里的水 2、四处张望,衔来石子,放进 罐子,石子越多水位越高,喝到水3、我的感想

写作点拨
1.这是我们十分熟悉的一则寓言故事---《乌鸦喝水》。读懂题意, 弄清内容以及故事情节对我们来说并不困难,难的是如何用英 语把这个故事生动地描述出来,一突出和增强故事的趣味性。 2.教书这类故事,为增强其生动和趣味性,可以用一般现在时, 当然也可以用一般过去时。无论用那种时态,一定要把故事叙 述完整。 3.寓言的最大特点是通过讲述故事,给人深刻的启示或道理,在 这篇习作中也是如此,同学们应该把他体现出来。

A Crow Drinks Water
A crow is very thirsty ,she finds some water in a jar . But unfortunately , she can’t reach the water because the mouth of the jar is too small. She looks around and sees some stones nearby. A good idea comes to her mind . She picks up a stone with her mouth , flies back and drops the stone into the jar.She repeats doing so. By and by, the water rises up so that she has a nice drink at last. What a clever crow she is ! From the story , we’re learned that nothing can not be done so long as we use our brains and make our efforts. The crow sets us a good example.

作文亮点
这是一则大家四分熟悉的故事,作者能用英语生动为我们讲述 出来实在是了不起

。其中,对乌鸦一系列动作的描写十分细致、 生动,且用词精当,如“find”“reach”“look around ”“pick up”“fly back” 讲述故事之余,作者还得到了启示。

察颜观色 关于颜色,一般说来,埃及人喜欢绿色和白色, 讨厌黑色和蓝色。他们在表示美好的一天时,称“白色的 一天”,而不幸的一天,则叫做“黑色或蓝色的一天”。 对真诚坦率的人称为“白心”,而称充满仇恨、嫉妒、奸 诈的人为“黑心”。埃及人的丧服为黑色。有地位或年老 者喜欢黑色或深色服装,以表示庄重和显示其声望。 不食猪肉 阿拉伯人自古视猪为肮脏的瘟神,穆斯林不食猪 肉已尽人皆知。此外,他们也不食狗、蛇、驴肉等。穆斯 林还不食自死的家禽和牲畜。他们认为真主创造万物,包 括牲畜在内,真主没让它们死,它们自己死了,违背了真 主的意愿,其肉不可食,否则便是对真主的不恭敬。凡病 死、撞死和所有未经穆斯林口诵“以大慈大悲真主的名义” 屠宰的牲口,皆属禁食之列。未经放血,灵魂仍在躯体内 的动物也不可食。仅死鱼可食,这算是例外。

? 肮脏的左手 埃及人(穆斯林皆如此)认为“右比左好”, 右是吉祥的,做事要从右手和右脚开始,握手、用餐、递送 东西必须用右手,穿衣先穿右袖,穿鞋先穿右脚,进入家门 和清真寺先迈右脚。究其原因,穆期林“方便”和做脏活时 都用左手,因此左手被认为是不干净的,用左手与他人握手 或递东西是极不礼貌的,甚至被视为污辱性的。 ? 妇女的禁忌 按伊斯兰教义,妇女的“迷人之处”是不能让 丈夫以外人的窥见的。即使是同性之间,也不应相互观看对 方的私处,因此,短、薄、透、露的服装是禁止的。哪怕是 婴儿的身体也不应无掩无盖,街上也不见公共澡堂。 在埃 及,看不见袒胸露背或穿短裙的妇女,也遇不到穿背心和短 裤的男人。虽然,埃及人对外国人是宽容的,不像某些伊斯 兰国家那么严厉,但必须提醒一点;在埃及穿背心、短裤和 超短裙是严禁到清真寺去的

第五章 说明文 入门方法
说明文是一种以寿命为主要表达方式的文体,用以说明事物的 构造、形态、性质、变化、功能、原理、成因和结果等。说明 文是对人、事及某方面的特征做一些有目的、具体的介绍。因 此若介绍人物,说明事理,介绍知识,均可以用这种文体。说 明文的基本特点是内容的科学性、说明的条理性和语言的准确 性。 常见的说明文有:知识介绍、商品介绍、解说词、说明书、内 容提要、广告等。它们只客观地介绍、解释,使读者获得知识 和信息,而并不需要发表和主张。常见的说明文有以下定

义、 注释、列举、分类、比较、引用、叙述、数学分析和综合等。 寿命问大都用一般现在时

优秀范文
English As we know ,English has become a world language . It’s more popular than any other language in China . English is widely used in the world ,and it is the most useful language around the world. But how can we learn English well ? The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English, we can learn it well. At school we should pend enough time in reading and speaking English , memorizing new words and phrases ,grasping the grammar focus. If you keep on working hard at it , you will be able to be good at it one day .

真题回放
本月全市展开以“做文明市民,从不闯红灯做起”为主题的交 通安全宣传月活动。请你写一篇80字左右的短文,谈谈如何遵 守交通法规。短文的开头已经给出 要求:1、条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整 2、一下 内容仅供参考。 Walkers:look,cross,left and right,carefully Drivers /riders : drink ,slow down , wear a seat belf… Passengers : get on/off , push , wait ,in line …

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe ,everyone should follow the traffic rules.

写作点拨 1、这是一篇事例说明文,说明遵守交通规则的重要性,并就此 展开说明。 2、从表格上看,习作应该从三大群体展开,即walkers/drivers /riders/passengers 3、再展开说明时,可用到祈使句以及时间和条件状语从句等。

Different kinds of buidings
有这样一些国家,缺少十分重要的东西,听起来让人惊奇, 但却是事实。 1、The country of no water .科威特。国土大部分地区是沙漠, 没有河流,湖泊,严重缺乏淡水。因此,约160万人口的粮食、 蔬菜需要进口。 2、The country of no cultivated land—摩纳哥。因它是世界上面 积最小的国家之一,全国面积总共不到两平方公里,全境为建 筑物和其他日常设施,没有耕地和农业。国家的收入主要靠旅 游业,食品全靠进口。

Different kinds of buidings
3、The country of no fire brigade---圣马力诺共和国。若发生火 灾,该国就请意大利邻国来灭火。 4、The country of no house number---埃塞俄比亚。全国个城市 只有大街到才有名字,小街小巷都没有,门牌号更不用提了, 往来邮箱要去邮局领。 5、The country of no wine shop(酒行)—瑞典。瑞典是个禁酒国, 因而这个国家没有酒店,餐馆也只准在晚餐供应少量的酒。人 们在家喝酒必须有“购酒特许证”,到指定的商店购买。

议论文
入门方法 议论文是一种以议论为主要表达方式的文体。所谓以论文,就 是摆事实,说道理,并要求通过多方面的分析,把道理说透。 议论文包括论点、论据和论证三个要素。论点也叫论断,是作 者对某一方

面的问题表面的主张、看法或者态度。论据是用来 证明论点的根据它是议论文的基础论据一般可以分为事实论据 和理论论据两类。论证就像一条红线,把需要的论据围绕着论 点组织起来,贯穿起来。 总之,论点是统率,解决“要证明什么的问题”;论据是基础, 解决“用什么来证明”的问题;论证是论点和论据时间的逻辑 关系,解决“如何证明”问题。

Housework
I think it is necessary for us to do some housework. First, in a family , the mother generally does the most housework. If you don’t want your mother to be too tired , do some housework to help her. Second , housework can help us do something all by ourselves , and it can also help us take good care of ourselves when we leave ourselves. Every day after school , I usually feel tired after hard study , so I can relax myself by doing housework. Do housework ! It’s good for you .

Learn to smile
Smile is an attitude to life . There may be something unpleasant. For example , you fail in an exam , or another time you are misunderstood by your friends . These unpleasant things may make you feel bad .Then what will you do ? Why not learn to smile ? Smiling to yourself can bring back your confidence . Sometimes , the greatest enemy is yourself ,that’s to say, sometimes , you are beaten by yourself .We should also learn to smile to others , it will help us to get closer to others. So ,smile is the most understood language.


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