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发布时间:2014-02-24 19:36:32  

写作思路

一、确定文体

对比选择型 Reading Intensively or Extensively

原因分析型 The Benefits of Traveling With Friends

解决问题型 How to Succeed in a Job Interview?

观点论证型Practice Makes Perfect

二、套用模板中的开头

如:How to Limit the Use of Disposable Products

Nowadays, __________ , which has aroused great concern among the people

around us. It brings about many new problems, such as ________. Consequently, the special attention must be devoted to this problem.

三、写出文章中间段落的写作提纲,并翻译成简单英文

如:My View on Studying Abroad

former : 提高外语水平、享受全新的生活方式

latter : 钱不够还得打工、文化上有障碍

mine : 希望可以出国

can improve their foreign language

can enjoy a new life style

have to find part-time jobs

a new environment may be a barrier

I wish to go abroad

四、将句子写完整,润色单词,复杂句式 (前因、后果、目的、举例、逗号)+时间、地点

比如:can enjoy a new life style

先写成:These students can enjoy a new life style

再写成:These students, in the foreign cultural background, can enjoy a new life style, which opens an amazing world to them and helps enrich their life experiences.

又如: have to find part-time jobs

先写成:Some overseas students have to find part-time jobs to make money.

再写成:Some overseas students, in order to help support themselves, have to find part-time jobs to make money, because the standard of living in a western

developed country is comparatively high, that is to say, these students may not have enough time to focus on their study.

五、将各提纲组织起来

A 利用分点标志词

三点及以上:

First and foremost ; To begin with

Additionally ; Furthermore;

Last but not least ; Finally

两点:

On the one hand ; On the other hand

For one thing ; For another

如: you should choose reliable online shops. This will guarantee that you can buy reliable products from the sellers with whom you are not familiar. you must be careful when you pay by bank cards since someone can steal your card number and password.you had better not buy very high-priced goods on line.

B 利用诸如not only because … but also because… 等来连接

比如:

From my point of view, many individuals argue that getting more certificates is useful not only because a majority of university graduates, who have to face fierce competition in such a tight job market, deem that holding various certificates will help prove they abilities to some extent but also because many employers and

human resources managers, in today’s China, measure a person’s ability merely by diplomas and certificates, which is absolutely unreasonable but true.

六、套用模板中的结尾

Only by these measures above can we ___________. However, the situations vary

from time to time and it is necessary for us to take flexible and effective measures to figure out this problem.

例文:

Advantages and Disadvantages of Online School

STEP 1 套用P164 模板的开头

There is no consensus of opinions among people with respect to the viewpoint on __________. Some people claim that it is meaningful, while others maintain that it is meaningless.

STEP 2&3 写提纲,并翻译成简单英文

正方观点:网络学习方便 相对便宜

反方观点:网络学习缺乏互动 没有监督

Studying online is convenient

Studying online is inexpensive

be short of interaction

without supervision

SETP 4美化并扩充句子

Studying online is convenient ? Studying online, especially for an adult, is much more convenient than having classes in a school which may be far away from home or his company. 加入了“逗号” 和 比较状语

Studying online is inexpensive ? Online schools charge comparatively

inexpensive tuitions and offer more flexible learning schedule. 美化了单词

be short of interaction ? online schools are short of interaction between teachers and students. Sometimes, the students can not find their teacher to ask questions. 举了一个例子

without supervision ? students who attend online schools are under less supervision than normal students. Some of these students may become less disciplined and even skip classes. 美化单词并举例

SETP 5连接各句

A majority of people advocate studying online not only because _________ but also because __________.

On the contrary, quite a few people consider that studying in an online school is inefficient. For one thing, __________ . For anther, _________ .

STEP 6 套用P164 模板的结尾

Taking into account all these features above, we can draw a conclusion that studying online has its both positive and negative effects just as every coin has two sides. From my perspective, I am in favor of the former/latter opinion in that __________ .

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写信格式作业的答案:

Department of Computer Science and Technology

Anhui University of Architecture

Hefei, Anhui Province

_______________________________________________________________________

(Mr. Ma Yunfei)

The Director

Personnel Department

ABC E-Commerce Co.,Ltd.

12th Floor, Yingqiao Mansion

432 Jiangning Road, Baiyun District

Guangzhou, Guangdong, 510022

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Yours faithfully,

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没有上过基础班的同学,以下是应用文划线句子的翻译(见第99页):

求职信

开头段(说明求职意向):With reference to your advertisement in Hefei Evening Paper 关于(得知)您在***做的广告,我想毛遂自荐应聘***一职。 坦率地说,我想尝试是否有可能获此职位。

精益求精或向应聘职位靠拢:In addition to the required courses in college, I have which helped me

cultivate and form my own character and interview style. 除了校内要求课程之外,我还花了大量时间学习了各种采访技巧,这帮助我培养并形成了自己的特点及采访风格。或(characteristic interview style独特的采访风格)

工作经历:Meanwhile, my working at spare time in the campus broadcast station as 与此同时,我在***的兼职工作也帮助我提高了自己,获得了宝贵经验。

说明自己可以胜任:It seems to me that this experience, together with my education, office such as yours. 就我看来,我的经验及学识使我成为***职位的理想人选。

结尾段(希望获得机会):I will treasure the chance and exert every effort to do a good 如果我幸运地得到此份工作,我将珍惜机会并尽力做好工作。此外,如果您能为我提供面试机会,我将不胜感激。还有,期待您不忙时的回信。

辞职信 谢谢您给我提供这么好的工作,但是很遗憾我现在不得不离开了。

希望您能考虑我的辞职请求,我也对我所造成的不便表示道歉。如果有任何事情能使工作顺利过渡的话,请您直接告诉我。

抱怨信

我认为是时候表达下***关于***公开的不满了。因为没有别人愿就此事反映情况,我觉得我该给您写封信,因为我希望您能解决这一问题。

综上所述,我觉得您和***应该采取有效措施解决这一问题。谢谢您的关注,耽误您的时间了。

道歉信B

双语的) tourist guide in your esteemed travel agency though I cordially appreciated your trust ……. 我非常抱歉,我没能接受您作为***的工作邀请。现在我给您写这封致歉信,希望您能接受我的道歉,我将不胜感激。

soon as possible. 尽管如此(有上段中陈述的理由),我还是想再次表达我对您的感激,以及我对我所造成的不便向您认真地道歉,因为***超出了我的能力范围。

感谢信

我想借此信表达我对您***衷心的感谢。我会将我们之间的友谊铭记。

再次对您的慷慨帮助致谢,请代我向您的家人问好!

祝贺信 欣闻您***,我在此给予您诚挚的祝贺。 分享您喜悦的同时,我也确信***。再次,请接受我真诚的祝贺!

复习作文计划:

请按以下步骤复习作文部分,顺序不可改变!

1. 掌握应用文写作格式

2. 背诵应用文范文中的划线句子

3. 背诵议论文可替代词汇

4. 背诵议论文四模板

5. 熟读应用文及议论文范文

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