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五篇解释类大作文

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五篇雅思解释类大作文范文-给产品调整过渡期童鞋的补偿-郑仁强

郑仁强的博客2013-01-21 20:47:51

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注意:这里提供的范文只是为了让各位同学更加直观地明白雅思解释类大作文的整体脉络结构,里面的模板最好不要完全照搬使用。另外,主体段每个小点的扩展没有给出。也就是说,这里的范文并非真正意义上的范文,这里的范文只是开头+结尾+每个主体段中每个小点的主题句(中心句)。为什么不给真正完整的范文呢?一是为了防止抄袭,二是为了避免各位万一碰到和范文类似的题目而写出雷同作文的尴尬。

前言:必读!必读!

雅思大作文解释类常考的题目分为三种,分别是RS, RE, RO, 后两种小类型在业内鲜有人提及,但其实07年以后都时常会考到。解释类题目是业内许多老师所忽视的领域,因为他们觉得考的少不值得讲,但去年却考了14次,充分反映了剑桥官方反预测的欲望和动向,所以以后解释类是必须要准备的。但是,现实是当基础不太好的学生碰到解释类的题目,尤其是RE,RO,都是一头雾水,完全不知道该怎样安排文章结构,更不要说展开思路了,结局往往都是人间惨剧。今天我发布的这四篇解释类范文,涵盖了上面我提到的所有三种类型,必然会对你的应考起到醍醐灌顶的功效。

第一篇RS(即原因+解决方案的题型)例题2008年9月13日

Some people think that it is important to protect the environment, but they take no actions. Why? What can we do to protect the environment?

第一段(开头)

The issue ofenvironmental protection has been in limelight recently. Some people maintain that protecting the environment is of considerable significance, but they take no actions. In this article, I intend to explore its causes and offer some possible measures.

第二段(分析原因)

本段内容概要:人们嫌麻烦,损害某些行业的经济利益,人都自私推卸责任,人们的环保意识不强

The primary source of this problem is that environmental protection may bring some inconvenience to individuals’ daily life. In addition to this, efforts to protect the environment will probably damage the economic interests of some industries. Another contributing factor is thatthe selfishness deeply rooted in human nature is likely to urge individuals to shirk this responsibility to

others. Finally, citizens are not motivated to take actual actions for the sake of environmental protection.

第三段(解决方案)

本段内容概要:加大宣传以提高公民环保意识,制定相关法律来惩罚污染环境的行为

政府应该给高污染企业提供补偿让他们关门

In order to overcome this problem, I believe we must strengthen our efforts to publicize the importance of environmental protection and thus promote

citizens’ motivation to take actions.It is also necessary for us to enact relevant laws to punish the behaviors of polluting the environment. Another positive step would be to provide those highly polluted industries with compensations for them to close down.

第四段(结尾)

In conclusion, I believe we must all recognize how serious this problem is. For the sake of human existence on this planet, it is suggested that joint efforts across the border should be made to rescue the only homeland on which we have survived for millions of years.

第二篇RS(即原因+解决方案的题型)例题2010年1月23日

The rich are becoming richer, and the poor are becoming poorer. Why? How can we solve this problem?

第一段(开头)

In our time and age, much debate has taken place about social equality. The disparity between the wealthy and the impoverished is being enlarged. In this article, I intend to explore its sources and provide some possible measures. 郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

第二段(分析原因)

本段内容概要:社会资源分配不均,社会保障/福利系统不完善,家庭背景不同 The primary cause of this problem is thatsocial resources are allocated unevenly among citizens. Furthermore, public welfare system fails to cover those disadvantaged groups in reality.Another contributing factor is

that individuals’ income is always determined by their

capabilities. Finally, people’s success is also directly related to one’s family background.

第三段(解决方案)

本段内容概要:富人应该帮助穷人摆脱贫困,向富人征更多的税,完善社会福利体系/给弱势群体更多的支持,大力推动慈善事业

In order to address this problem, I believe we should foster the development of charity organizations and conduct more fund-raising activities. It is also

necessary for us to levy higher taxes from the wealthy. Another positive step would be to provide disadvantaged groups with more support such as free education and medical care. Besides, the haves are encouraged to help the poor get rid of poverty.

郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

第四段(结尾)

For the sake of social solidarity, it is vital that we take more measures to bridge the disparity between the rich and the poor. If this problem fails to be solved properly, a large number of crisis and dangers will emerge.

郑仁强原创整理,转载请注明出处

第三篇RE(即原因+影响的题型)例题2007年12月15日

We can see more and more images about violence and disasters in TV. Why? What are the effects on individuals and society?

第一段(开头)郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

The issue of TV news programs has aroused wide concern in recent

times.Viewers are exposed to an increasing number of violence and disaster images on TV news programs. In this essay, I intend to analyze its sources along with some effects on the individual and the society.

第二段(分析原因)

本段内容概要:吸引观众的眼球,灾难和暴力事件在增多,媒体科技的发展 The chief cause of this issue is that these images are designed by the media to catch viewers’ attention. In addition to this, the incidences of disasters and violence are on the rise.Another contributing factor is that the development of media technology helps individuals to access what’s happening in the world.

第三段(分析影响)郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

本段内容概要:引发公众恐慌,误导青少年,犯罪率升高从而导致社会不稳定 Firstly, nobody would disagree that violence and disaster images creates panic among the citizens. Besides,these images are likely to produce adverse

effects on the physical and mental fitness of teenagers. It is also important for us to recognize that the conviction rate will increase and this may pose a threat to social stability.

第四段(结尾)

In reality, this problem is unlikely to be resolved in the short term. However, it is by no means insurmountable, and I am convinced that the government should

enact relevant laws to put proper restrictions on the content of media coverage. 郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

第四篇RO(即原因+观点的题型)例题2007年10月13日

Some employers think academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities. Why? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

第一段(开头)

The discussion about academic qualificationhas triggered a new round of heated debate in recent years. Some employers assert that academic

qualifications play a more important role in their selection of employees than life experiences and personal qualities. In this essay, I will analyze its sources and offer my own perspective on this development.

第二段(分析原因)郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

本段内容概要:学历越高能力越强,学历更容易评判,社会对学历的过度崇拜 The primary source of this issue is that higher academic qualifications mean higher capability.Moreover, academic qualification serves as a more efficient way to identify talents for employers. Another contributing factor is that the society harbor excessive enthusiasm and trust towards academic

qualifications.

第三段(分析利弊)郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

本段内容概要:助长应试教育的风气,人才流失,滋生社会不稳定郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

From my point of view, this is a curse for both individuals and the

society. Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that it may add fuel to the culture of exam-oriented education and neglect the cultivation of students in other important areas. In addition to this, brain loss is another problem we have to face. Besides, this is likely to cause resentment among citizens of lower academic qualifications and pose a threat to social stability.

第四段(结尾)郑仁强原创 郑仁强原创

By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the future. It, therefore, demands our further consideration. 郑仁强原创整理,转载请注明出处

以上几篇范文在模板框架方面参考了“9分雅思写作”,特此声明。

第五篇RO(即原因+观点的题型)例题-前考官原创

In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all

modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more

and more similar.What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

Sample answer

Every city has its architectural character, but the similarities between cities are more obvious these days than in the past. In my opinion, one reason for this is the high price of land.

In most large cities, land is scarce and consequently it is very valuable. This has led to the construction of tall buildings which occupy only a small area of land while providing lots of floor space where people can live or work. Buildings of this type are made of concrete and steel and can be built

comparatively quickly using prefabricated materials. They do not use local materials, such as stone, timber or brick. In consequence, many cities now look very much the same and you might not know whether you were in Brisbane, Bangkok or Berlin when you are on the street.

While I realize that we cannot stand in the way of progress, I believe that cities should try to keep some individuality. For example, in Paris it is prohibited to build very tall buildings in the center of the city, as this would spoil the overall appearance of the skyline.

Other cities have chosen to design unique buildings to ensure they look

different. The twin towers in Kuala Lumpur or the Opera House in Sydney are examples of this approach, and I agree with this kind of initiative.

All in all, although it is regrettable that modern cities look similar, I tend to feel that this is unavoidable. However, it can be argued that, even if the buildings are similar, cities will maintain their own character as a result of cultural

diversity, the terrain and the climate, which ultimately determine how people live.

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