Choic, fellowed, challeges
adapt… to confront; be beneficial in improve
Cultivate them learn to be independent
Get… is a …
Their learning only froms books
They are just judged the graduates from the academic grades thus some graduates … have much pressure…
release academic pressure is quite …
take a job can reduce…
… between make money and get knowledge
…dull and bring life will roll around.
We may have so …They can’t hardworking
Others in favor of they opposite view.
The students lack of work experience.
I will success.
I have to follow-through.
… we are just a student who does students should do
I have some ideas want to share with you.
Only in both knowledge and experience in order to better find the way to success.
They thought most just left campus students tent to idealize their life.
There still have some students promote their study…
…high goals cause they miss opportunities
1）Run-on sentences 连写句 （不会断句，使用句号）
They think that geting into business for other reasons besides the money the more education you have, the less money you make.
… college life has a lot of …, we need to mobilize our initiative.
This is one of the pressing problems confronting our society is employment.
Life have no targets is lamentable .
There are also have many students pay attention..
There are many Ss make their effort to…
There are a lot of things make you embarrassed…
There has no ice left them for rest
There have a person
…this is a question puzzles the Ss.
It’s as a result of they always have sth. On their mind.
… who knows avoid his weakness.
3）片段句 sentence fragments
For it is essential to their maturity
When we shopping online
Graduate employment structural imbalance between supply and demand contradiction, so I think…
It is high time for us to study hard… and the using the spare time to broaden….
Because we are students now.
So, just browsing around the internet, searching… , and with the trend of the times, with the ever-increasing number of e-shopping crowd, starting your tour of e-shopping.
Not only working well, but also studying well.
Because their taking part-time job.
When it comes to the college life that should be meaningful and colorful.
It’s not only can save …
It is quite influence…
Small cities… need talent, small business, there are a large number… . what’s more, …
The employers are tend to..
To find a job… is rest with ourselves.
My mark was fall behind others.
I was not flinch at sth.
Everyone will be get old.
I’m share the view…
We are not only get…
… it stand in the way…
… a large number of employees was laid off
…some people has
…doing part-time jobs help students..
A person who cannot climb the summit of the mountain, he or she do not know the …
1）Because … so
… and because of that communication become an essential part in society. So we have to make more friends…
We also can
3）… get a satisfied job
4）As college moments passing by
With time pass by
5）When we doing a part-time job…
Are You a Slave to Your Cell Phone?
Who Touched Our Hometown?
Are we Still the Apple of the Society?
Such as we choice a small fish or a big one.
2. 片段句 (不用连词，不用句号，分号，多个句子放在一个句子中；副词作连词 )
In regard to exercise, many people are passive, therefore, they have…, they are infected with…, at the same time, using…drugs cripple our body.
Because some graduates run their own business…
These two events and the only use of nuclear weapons in war to date.
I can give everyone an assurance that do exercise one hour everyday keep you away from doctor. Thousands of people visit an area or climb mountain easily result in soil hardening.
There are so many graduates flood to laborer market.
Fast food also make us can do nothing.
College life begin means that we can get rid of our parents’ control…
There is a pair of such lovers, they fall in love is for their own future.
…so they choose fall in love to kill the time.
Opinions are vary from person to person.
A good environment can make us living healthy.
Why does college students find it difficult to …?
It drive forward… and bring in …
It not rely solely on professional skills and knowledge but experience.
7. there be
There also have the person who just want a well-paid job.
There has no ice left them for rest.
9. such as , for example.
We also can get happy from it.
The college has a large libraries where have amounts of books.
12. so that
So that unemployment be considered as the first problem of Chinese problems.
…they always brace to overcome them.
So I hope love in the college fulls of sunshine.
Then they both toward their common goal to move forward constantly.
…we can choose that what we want in the job market.
The question that which is the best way to stay health…