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结构清晰明了建议具体合理的优秀范文:(10分)

郑叶语

Dear Liu Ming,

I’ve got your letter and I am sorry to hear about your problems. I can understand your feeling. Here is some advice for you.

If you study hard but you still can’t get good grades, you could discuss with your teachers or friends. They might be of great help. As for the second problem, you should go to the doctor or take some medicine. I think maybe doing more exercise can make you energetic and you won’t feel sleepy. You say you sometimes argue with your parents. If I were you, I would talk with them and tell them my problems, so I think they can understand me.

I hope you can be optimistic when you face problems and try to work things out. I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you!

Yours Alice 王瑾暄

Dear Liu Ming

Thank you for writing to me and telling me about your trouble. I have the same problems with you. I have some suggestions for you.

One of your problems is that you study hard but you can’t get good grades. For this problem, I think you should write more and it’s important to understand the questions. About the second problem, you can drink a cup of milk before you go to bed and you should go to bed earlier. The last problem is the most important. If I were you, I would talk more things with my parents. If you have more patience, your parents will understand you.

As far as I am concerned, this advice can be effective. I hope they can help you. Yours Alice

结构清晰建议具体合理的基础上语言表达更丰富的范文 (11&12分) 雍亦宁

Dear Liu Ming

I’m sorry to hear you are in trouble now and I do hope I could help you get through the hard time.

Of course you know the good grade is from the good study, so why not ask your teachers for help? Maybe they can give you some good advice. You said you often had headaches and felt sleepy. Maybe. If I were you, I would go to bed early and exercise every day. . You mentioned your argument with your parents. . Have a good talk with them because you love each other.

I’m looking forward to your good news.

Yours

Alice 梁玥

Dear Liu Ming

Thanks for writing to me and telling me about your trouble. I can understand your feeling. Here is some advice for you.

First of all, I think you should learn to “ask”. A man becomes learned by asking questions. Or. As for the second problem, you must build up your body, and you should have a happy mood. If you relax, you will get sleep. As for the third problem, t Then you should know that they love you and hope you better,you can understand them.

I hope you can be optimistic when you face problems and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours

Alice 周亦方

Dear Liu Ming,

Thank you for writing to me and telling me about your trouble. Although I don’t have the same problems, I think I can help you.

First of all, I believe many of the students have this problem. You think you can’t get good grades, but why don’t you think better? If you have a good attitude at the first, you can be more and more positive. And you can also discuss with your teacher. As for the second problem, you should do exercise everyday and have to early to bed and early to rise. After that, you will have a healthy body. And what’s more, If I were you, I would not argue with my parents. Because in my opinion, all the parents love their children. Why not be happy? I wonder what feeling is when you read this reply, but I think I can understand you. All in all, I think you need something---Smile. I look forward to hearing from you!

Yours

Alice

王嘉璇

Dear Liu Ming

Thanks for writing to me and telling me about your trouble. Although I don’t have these problems I will give you some good ideas to solve them.

You’d better review what you studied every day. Besides, you can also ask your classmates or parents for help. They are good ways to improve your grades. As for the second problem, Sometimes we may have some different opinions with your parents. . Actually all parents love their kids. If you respect them, they will also respect you.

These are all the suggestions. I hope you can be optimistic when you face

problems and try to work things out.

I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you!

Yours

Alice

韩兆芸

Dear Liu Ming

Thanks for writing to me and telling me about your trouble and The reason why you can’t get good grades is that you may not have good learning methods, so why not discuss with your teachers? They might be of great help. As for the second problem, you should keep doing exercise every day. Now, you are in poor health. h. You can also go to bed early and get up early. As for the third problem, I just want to say all parents in the world love their kids, why don’t you try to communicate with them? It’s important for us to learn in Junior three. At the same time, you always have such problems so I totally understand you. However, I hope you can be optimistic when you face them. I hope my suggestions can help you.

I’m looking forward to hearing good news from you!

Yours

Alice

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