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My hobby

初二(20)班 马杰

Different people have different hobbies. For example, someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on.

I used to read books and draw pictures because by reading books I could learn many funny things. But now I don't like it. I can only learn from books. I couldn't get knowledge from others. I need a change. Traveling is my favorite hobby now. But I can't go traveling a lot. I can visit many different places of interest by traveling. I can learn a lot about people, places and history. It's very interesting. What is your hobby ? Let's share each other!

I love traveling. I have great fun in traveling.

评语:这篇习作从不同人们的爱好入手,然后谈到自己的爱好,并能从不同的方面进行阐述和举例,文章末尾语句概括全文的主旨,起到了画龙点睛的作用。 指导教师:刘永华

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