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提示词语：grow up, show one’s gratitude(表示感激), something special
There’s no doubt that parents have given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up
happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.
Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CD for them.
Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CD. It was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.
I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best
encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this more often.
昨天你高兴地看到许多同学在校园里自觉地做了一些事去保护环境。请你以“Learn from Them”为题
提示词：pick up the trash, plant, reuse, save
Learn from Them
Nowadays more and more people have done a lot to protect the environment. Yesterday, I was
glad to see many students volunteer their time to make our school environment better. Some
students picked up the trash on the playground, some students planted the trees, and other students made posters calling on people to lead a low-carbon life.
I was moved by what they did. The environmental protection is not only the business of the
government, but also the responsibility of each of us. Even a small effort can make a great
difference so I made up my mind to learn from them.
I will turn off the lights when I leave the room, and I won’t keep the water running when I am
not using it. Besides, reusing some old things I plan to throw away will be my choice. What’s more, I will remind people around me to take part in such activities.
Action speaks louder than words. Let’s work together!
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Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share my ideas with you. What you are doing in the “Green Earth” club is meaningful.
I am also strongly against any kind of wasting. With such a large population in China, food is especially precious. People should be encouraged to eat at home. In this way, the leftovers can be the next day’s meal and much less food would be wasted. If people do have to eat outside and there is food left, they should take it home and eat it later.
I believe it’s our duty to protect our earth. Actually it is not that difficult. A little more attention from everyone in daily life will be of great help.
I’m glad to hear from you. It’s my honor to be with you and show you around Beijing. Now I will tell you about my plan for your two-day stay here.
On the first day, I am going to take you to my school and study with me. In the morning, you can choose 3 classes to listen to. In the afternoon, there will be different kinds of clubs after class. - 3 -
I am sure you will fall in love with my school.
On the second day, I plan to have a bus tour to enjoy the sights of Beijing. We will get off at Tian’an Men Square, where we can feel the perfect mixture of the past and the present. After walking on the magnificent square, we can visit the Palace Museum. Here you can see some wonderful buildings and learn about Chinese history better.
So, what’s your decision? I just can’t wait to meet you and you’re always welcome！
现在，请你就与人交往(communicating with others)的话题向《21世纪英语报》投稿。 描
提示词语：experience; get on well; help; talk; by oneself; understand; respect; share; enjoy
In our life, we communicate with others every day. It’s important to get on well with each
other. However, it’s not an easy thing.
Once, two of my classmates and I were working on a wall
newspaper. I thought I had a great idea but they didn’t use it. I was sad and decided never to talk to them. But after giving it a second thought, I talked to them, telling them about my feelings and how I wished they could use my idea. They apologized to me sincerely and explained to me the reason. We got to understand each other and came up with a better idea which made the wall newspaper eye-catching.
From the experience, I know how important it is to have a
heart-to-heart talk, especially when having problems. If we try to understand each other more, we will enjoy a better relationship and more happiness.
21世纪英文报初三版开展题为“My Best Friend in Middle School Life”的征文，作为初三学生，你应
提示词语：kind, friendly, help, hope
My best friend in my middle school is Jack White. He impressed me deeply with his kindness
when we met for the first time. I had a fall when we new students lined up on the playground. Jack came over then and helped me. Since then, we have become good friends.
Tom is not only kind, but also smart. He does well in his studies, although not at the top level,
and have time for relaxing activities. He always looks happy. I’ve learned a lot from him.
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I hope to keep this friendship with him as long as I can, because our life needs friendship.
I’m glad to know you are coming to Beijing．It’s true that the city is getting more beautiful and the people are getting friendlier because of the Garden Expo. The city government and people here are paying more and more attention to the environment. We have planted many trees and changed wastelands into green areas. So when you are here, you’ll see tall trees, green grass and beautiful flowers almost everywhere. If you visit the Garden Expo, you’ll enjoy more beautiful scenery and even more beautiful smiles people give you. We are ready to welcome visitors from around the world.
I feel proud of the great changes and I am going to be a volunteer to help the visitors during the summer vacation. When you come, I’d be glad to show you around. I’m sure you’ll have a wonderful time here in Beijing.
If you have more questions, please ask me．
假设你是学校的安全宣传员，请利用下面本地学生道路伤害事故原因统计图表，写一篇英文短文，向你校的外籍学生介绍那些事故的主要原因，提醒他们注意个人交通安全，针对这些主要原因提出几点保障出行安全的建议,最后，表达你对他们在这里安全、愉快生活和学习的良好祝愿。（不少于60词） - 5 -
Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places. For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened just because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly, like not using the crosswalk or listening to music while walking across.
Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re using the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully when you are crossing a road.
That’s all for my story and tips. I hope they can be of some help to your safety. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here.
Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.
…For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened first because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly.
Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re on the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully before you go across.
All this is good for your road safety. Do remember it anytime. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here.
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提示词语：moving experiences；in our daily life；help；remember；be deeply moved；learn from
We often have moving experiences in our daily life. They help us walk along the right road. I still remember that day. I was taking the final exam when I found I didn’t have my eraser with me. I was so worried that I almost cried. Just then, Mike, a boy next to me, understood what was happening. He quickly cut his eraser in half and handed me one part. With tears in my eyes, I finished the exam.
I’m deeply moved by what Mike did. He is a real friend. He cares others a lot. I want to learn from him to be the person in need.
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I’m glad to hear from you. Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.
I think you’d better go to Peter’s birthday party since he is your close friend. You can choose to play other games such as chess if you don’t like playing computer games. You don’t need to worry too much about the science report. You can finish it on Sunday. I’m sure you can manage it. But if you don’t go to the party, I’m afraid you may lose the friend.
Although it’s true that sometimes people’s needs are different, remember friends can always stand beside you. We must understand and care each other.
I hope what I said can help you.
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The Power of Praise
The Power of Praise
Praise is like sunlight to our spirit. It gives us confidence and hope. However, this heavenly gift usually shows up unexpectedly.
In junior high, it seemed fashion was never my cup of tea, for I had neither a lovely face nor an attractive figure. I found it boring and even heart-breaking to go shopping.
The time came when we had to dress up for the prom. Unwillingly, joined my friends on the trip to Macy's. Unsurely, I tried on a bright violet flowered dress and stepped out of the dressing room. A good-looking lady was standing there. She glanced at me, smiled and said, “I love your dress." She had no idea how much her praise meant to me. These magic words touched my heart and I started to love my imperfect appearance.
I appreciated that stranger's words of praise, which are not often heard. Now I keep reminding myself of the power of praise, even strangers, because we never know where it might lead.…
某英文报纸就他/她的微笑（His/ Her Smile）话题征文，请你投稿。
提示词语：show, encourage, difficult, brave, learn to do, feel good, cheer up, try one’s best
Smiles are beautiful and important. A smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that person’s day. I was once moved by a smile from my friend. Three years ago, when I made a speech on my first day of class, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Tony, one of my classmates, sitting in the front row, smiled at me and spoke in a low voice, “Yes, you can.” I was greatly encouraged by his smile. His smile was important because it gave me self-confidence.
I will never forget my friend’s smile because I’ve learned that something so simple can make a big difference.
生活中我们需要相互理解。在我们成长的过程中，常常有这样的情况：开始不理解的人或事，后来逐渐理解了。请以“I finally understood…”为题，描述一件你自己的亲身经历，并谈谈感受。
所给词汇仅供选用：have a talk, grow up, experience, change, true love
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I Finally Understanding Her
I used to think that memory would be my strongest supporter forever.
Then came my 14th birthday. Mommy prepared a wonderful celebration for me. Everything went perfectly until that night, before I kissed her good night as usual, she suddenly announced she would stop doing everything for me since I had grown up. At first, I thought she was just kidding. But the next morning, she refused to drive me to school. What’s more, other rules followed, such as I had to share some housework, arrange my pocket money by myself among other things.
I got angry and couldn’t understand why she had changed so much. One night, I overheard a talk between my parents and my father asked if it was really necessary to treat me like this, then my mother replied: “I know it will be a little difficult for her now, but I have to prepare her for every challenge she’ll face in the future.” Finally, I understood her deep love for me.
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假设你叫李华，是英国中学生彼得的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给彼得写一封回信，回答他的 有关压岁钱(lucky money)的问题，提出你的建议。
I’m glad to know you are having a good time in Chengdu.
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Giving lucky money to children is a custom. I get lucky money every year. I will put most of it in the bank, and spend the rest on some books. This year, I also got lucky money. With it, I bought some school things for several poor students in Ningxia.
For you, I think it’s a good idea to buy a gift with the lucky money for your host family before you leave China. You can also buy some Chinese gifts for your parents and friends in England. Or, just keep it as good memories.
I hope what I said can help you.
某英文报纸以“我最尊敬的人（The person I respect most）”为题进行征文，请你投稿。介绍一下你最尊敬的人是谁，你为什么尊敬他/她，你从他/她身上学到了什么。 提示词语：important, learn, help…
某英文杂志正在举办以“How do you get on well with your classmates ?”为主题的征文比赛，假设你是李明，请你写一篇短文参赛，文中请先简单介绍自己，然后说说你平时是怎样与同学相处的，并谈谈你对同学之间友谊的认识或看法。 提示词语：name, together, help, fun, friendship
How I get on well with my classmates
My name is Li Ming, a fifteen-year-old boy in Grade 3 in No.1 Middle School. I like making friends and most of my classmates are my good friends.
At school, we not only study but also play together. After school we either do homework or have fun together. Besides, we often help each other when we meet difficulties.
No man is an island, as the saying goes: a man without friends is an angel without wings. I am sure I can fly higher and farther with the wings of friendship.
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senior high school entrance exam, efficiency (效率), improve, think, find, listen, do, ask, hope
Senior high school entrance exam is coming soon. Our teacher asked us to think how to improve our learning and get better efficiency. I think it important and necessary to do so. I have learned a lot in school. I’ll go over what I have learned and find out where my difficulties are according my revision plan. And then I’ll ask my teacher and classmates for help. Keeping healthy and good mood will also do good. I hope I will get good scores and enter my ideal school.
Picture A Picture B
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Thanks for your email and sending me the pictures.
The drawing competition sounds very interesting to me. There must be many smart pictures and ideas about the near future.
What I believe will happen in 2050 is still a question to myself at present. But I guess picture
A explains the cities in 2050 better, because almost everyone in the whole world have been trying to do their best to protect the environment for long, such as, driving less, or recycling water.
What’s more, our government is working hard for improving our living conditions. As a result, there will be cleaner streets, easier traffic and life in 2050.
Do you agree with me?
The drawing competition sounds very interesting to me. There must be many smart pictures and ideas about the near future.What I believe will happen in 2050 is still a question to myself at present. But I guess picture B describes the cities in 2050 well. Although some people are trying to save the environment now, there’re still many others having no ideas about the environment
protection. For example, I could see a lot of bottles or cans thrown on the way and many fish dying in the dirty rivers. As a result, there won’t be great changes but dirtier in 2050.
Do you agree with me?
提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film…
English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well.
English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a lot to improve my English. Firstly, it's very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that I can go over my lessons later. Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it. I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English party or English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English.
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Dear Li Ming，
I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What should I do?
I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right. She wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you. It’s good for your study. I think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve your English. Your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. As a student, we should work hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers.
提示词语：duty, protect, environment, ride bikes, go out, helpful, air, clean, do exercise,
traffic jam, hope, believe
It’s our duty to protect our environment. More and more people ride bikes when they go out nowadays. It’s helpful to keep the air clean. I usually ride to school. I only take a bus on a rainy day. On my bicycle I can breathe the fresh air and do some exercise to keep healthy. On the other hand, I can keep away from the traffic jam and make sure I can arrive at school on time. To my joy, I can also do a bit for keep the air clean by riding a bicycle.
I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. I believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.
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Don’t worry about the food. My parents will prepare each meal for us. If you don’t get used to eating our Chinese food, we can buy some western food in the supermarket near my home.
I also think it’s a good chance for us to learn from each other. In our free time I will take you to visit the Great Wall and other places. During the trips I can practice my spoken English with you. I’m sure you can also make great progress in Chinese.
I hope you will get used to the life here soon. So you can have a good time together with our family. Perhaps next year, I will have a chance to go to the USA and live with you.
提示词语： surf on the internet, watch TV , play sports, do outdoor activities…
Nowadays, many middle school students prefer to surf on the internet or watch TV all day in their spare time. But they don’t want to do any outdoor activities.
I don’t think this is good for us to do so. Instead, we should spend our spare time in a better way. First, we’d better do sports regularly. By doing this, we could not only keep healthy but also relax ourselves. It is also a good idea to go out with our friends. Such as watching movies, climbing hills or joining some clubs.
In a word, as middle school students, it is really important to lead a healthy life.
学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你是Li Hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词：Li Hua，student, Class Four, Grade Three , the Old People’s Home, sing, dance,
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In the lake of my memories, there is a photo which always shines like a pearl. It’s a gift from my former teachers and classmates in Shanghai – the best one I’ve ever got.
Before I came to Beijing, they gave me this photo. I was shocked that the photo was taken a year ago during our spring outing. All my teachers and classmates were in the photo. At the back of the picture, there are 48 signatures and best wishes from them. I read them one by one. I didn’t realize that my tears were running down my cheeks until my friends hugged me.
I love this special present so much because it shows me the wonderful time which I spent with my dear classmates and teachers. Besides, it is their wishes that fill my heart with love and warmth all the time. I’ll always treasure it as the most valuable pearl in the world.
Dear Zhang Hua,
Last Saturday, my friends visited me and asked me to go out to play with them.
But my parents didn’t allow me to go out and they even talked to my friends about it for
a long time. I felt embarrassed in front of my friends. What’s more, my parents often
told me not to play with them because their grades are not good. Do you have the same
problem? I need your help.
I’m glad to hear from you.
I hope what I said can help you.
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. First of all, I think you should have a talk with your parents. Maybe they will say you don’t understand them. But at least they will know what you are thinking. Then you can invite your teacher to your home to talk with your parents. Maybe this can change your parents’ ideas. Finally, I think you should let them know that your friends are not so bad as they think.
In my opinion, all parents love their children. So try to communicate with them and I’m sure they will understand you.
I hope what I said can help you.
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我们的家乡正在发生着日新月异的变化，为配合我区举办的“礼仪门头沟(Charm Mentougou)”活动的开展，请你以“How to behave well ?”为主题，写一篇不少于60词的英语作文参赛。
内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. ?? 注意：1. 文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。
How to behave well?
As a student in Mentougou, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules. Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.
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目前环境变得越来越糟，我们都应该 “低碳(low carbon)”生活。现在某英文报纸就此话题征文，请你投稿。请谈谈我们应该如何做，并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语：environment, become, worse, protect, have a “low carbon” life, reuse, save, important
The environment is becoming worse and worse. We should do something to protect the environment. We need to have a low carbon life. First, we should go to school on foot or by bus instead of going by car. Second, we should save energy by turning off the lights, TV sets and air conditionings in time when we don’t need them. Third, don’t use plastic bags when we are shopping. Instead, take shopping basket with us. In addition, water should be reused as much as possible. Lastly, we should plant more trees to make carbon low.
I think it is very important to protect our environment. It’s our duty to have a low carbon life. Our life will become better and better if more people take actions to offer their help.
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I have received your e-mail recently. I can understand you .I think you are right .I hope you can get ready to help others as possible as you can.
I can give you some advice. First when you meet such things ,you'd better call110 to ask the policeman for help .Besides you should try to explain to his daughter ,I think maybe she didn't know the reason and just was too worried. What's more, don't think more about that, I think you did right ,sooner or later she will understand you and thank you.
I hope you can go on helping people in trouble .I'm sure if everyone can give a hand to others ,the world will become more and more beautiful.
I wish you are happy all the time!
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生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法…… 现在，某英文报纸就分享（Sharing）话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。提示词语：share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident
I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new
classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas ,problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.
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提示词语：every family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, be / feel proud of
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提示词语：Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important?, listen, talk, read, write
I am glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many
foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
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